Comments | hallowedmoments: Stumbling Homeward by Loony4lupin

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Stumbling Homeward by Loony4lupin

Jul 21, 2008 13:06

Author: loony4lupin
Requestor: daysandweeks
Claim: Percy finds his way back into the Weasley family.
Rating: Light R
Pairings: All canon ships are implied and one secret ship that does not contradict Weasley canon relationships.
Summary: Seven days after the final battle, Percy receives a letter that brings him back to the Burrow for the first time in a long time.
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requestor: daysandweeks, character: charlie weasley, character: weasley family, character: percy weasley, character: draco malfoy, author: loony4lupin

Comments 10

shiiki July 22 2008, 11:51:46 UTC

Wow, this was certainly full of surprises! I liked very much how when Percy returned, it was on his own terms, and based on the family's need for him, rather than the other way round. I thought each scene with every family member was a good fit (would have been nice to see Arthur and Bill, to round it all off as well), and a nice blend of amusement and emotion. Nice job!

tourdefierce July 22 2008, 18:03:10 UTC

Percy was so hard to get right, but I think he would return on his own terms. He's still his own person, no matter how much of a Weasley he is.

I wanted to right Arthur and Bill... but they didn't want to play. My dearest apologises.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a very difficult write.

luvscharlie July 22 2008, 12:39:19 UTC

This is the Charlie I L♥VE and boy do I ever L♥VE this Charlie! He could not be hotter.

tourdefierce July 22 2008, 18:04:08 UTC

You love Charlie?

WHO KNEW?!?!

Please, you know full well that I wrote this Charlie because you've brain washed me. ; )

dransinha77 July 22 2008, 17:30:11 UTC

I loved the friendship between Percy and Charlie and Percy's interaction with each family member!
Great story! :)

tourdefierce July 22 2008, 18:04:53 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.

I would like to think that Percy and Charlie have a lot in common, more than people would think.

Thanks for reading!

anguis_1 July 22 2008, 18:44:04 UTC

This idea seems very fitting, that it's Percy who has the logic and almost-detachedness to start to sort the family out. Raw emotions, just enough crack to give it that darkly humourous family-in-the-midst-of-a-crisis feel, and great insights--lovely, lovely fic!

tourdefierce July 24 2008, 03:52:33 UTC

Thank you so very much.

I'm glad you enjoyed the roller coaster of emotions, and especially the crack because it's my favorite to write.

You're making me blush!

Thanks so much for commenting.

secretsolitaire July 24 2008, 02:38:36 UTC

Oh, this was so lovely. Gah. I love that by helping to heal the rest of the family Percy is also healing himself. Also, Charlie/Draco is one of my little guilty pleasure pairings, so that was a cherry on top of the rest of this. :-D

The open window flooded the room with moonlight, illuminating three figures. Molly and Arthur sat on the bed with their backs leaning against the wall and each other fast asleep. George's head was asleep in Mum's lap.

This was my favorite image. So beautiful, and it says it all really.

tourdefierce July 24 2008, 03:54:20 UTC

Thank you! You always leave the most wonderful reviews.

I love that by helping to heal the rest of the family Percy is also healing himself. Oh you are lovely!!!

It's Charlie/Draco just freaking fantastic! I keep trying to stop myself from writing it but I just can't. I love how snarky Draco is and how aloof Charlie can be.

I'm so glad you liked this, thank you for commenting.