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Oct 15, 2007 10:50

Title: Breathe
Characters: Jack, Ianto
Words: 1000-ish
Note: Very late birthday ficlet for tanarian. For 'Jack/Ianto,' 'chill,' and 'coffee morning.' Lack of plot. May be fluff, angst, or some weird combination of the two.

Breathe )

gift-fic, jack/ianto

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tanarian October 27 2007, 07:04:34 UTC
Ooooh, angsty and happy all at the same time! The most difficult to achieve and for me? *happy bounce* Thank you! It was a lovely surprise!

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halfspokenwords October 28 2007, 17:42:44 UTC
I was aiming for happy, but these two just wouldn't have it. I'm glad you liked it nonetheless! *beams*

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crabby_lioness October 28 2007, 03:40:29 UTC
Very lovely.

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halfspokenwords October 28 2007, 17:43:35 UTC
Thank you!

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mad_jaks October 28 2007, 07:47:02 UTC
Ianto's head back on his shoulder
That's just perfect - so of course that's how I'm seeing him further down when he's got that blanket wrapped round him.

And it really feels like first thing in the morning... and they're so comfortable together... and I'll stop already- Short version: I really liked it.

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halfspokenwords October 28 2007, 17:45:55 UTC
It's a rather lovely image, isn't it? It's the comfort more than anything that I wanted to capture, because I think in such a young/undefined relationship it says more than most anything could.

Oh, don't stop on my account. :) Glad you liked!

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mad_jaks October 28 2007, 18:05:47 UTC
It's the comfort more than anything that I wanted to capture
Well you certainly did that *g*

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badwolf36 October 28 2007, 18:33:38 UTC
Gorgeous. A really lovely little moment between those two with a dash of angst to really set their characters. Loved it.

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hellenebright October 28 2007, 21:21:32 UTC
It reminds me of the sort of things I used to do - although my obsession was standing out under the stars, having gone out with a country lad and discovered what the sky looked like *without* street lights.

Very, very nice.

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