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halfshellvenus

Supernatural Slash "Sight" Drabbles: Unforseen

Sep 05, 2006 00:12

Title: Unforseen
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Sam/Dean (Slash, Drabble set)
Rating: PG-13 (Subject matter)
Summary: The ache of melancholy is eased by one thing only...
Author's Notes: A 5x100 Slash-drabble arc for supernatural100’s “Sight” challenge.

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( How can something so simple leave him breathless and aching? )

wincest, my_fic, sn_slash, drabbles

Comments 42

missyjack September 5 2006, 07:16:24 UTC

Beautiful, poignant, poetic.

Thankyou.

halfshellvenus September 5 2006, 07:31:42 UTC

Thank you, missyjack. These didn't get anywhere as porny as I thought they would, but once a forward arc got started I had to follow where it led.

Love.That.Icon. It's Sam/Dean perfection. :)

missyjack September 5 2006, 07:50:56 UTC

Glad you didn't let yourself be distracted by the search for porn!

But seriously ;) the intimacy here has a tactile quality to it that *sigh* I just have no words to describe how it moves me.

mooyoo September 5 2006, 07:47:55 UTC

Sam’s anguish bleeds from his face

Yum. (I have no idea where that came from, but it was my first thought when I read that part. I love that line so much I want to eat it up)

I really liked the piece leaving Lawrence. I like Dean's edginess - wish we'd seen more of that throughout the episode - and Sam doing what he's able to and what Dean will (grudgingly) allow to offer comfort.

Very nice overall.

halfshellvenus September 6 2006, 16:56:11 UTC

I know what you mean about wanting to eat certain lines up. It makes more subconscious sense than analytical sense, I think-- and I work on both levels!

I really liked the piece leaving Lawrence. I like Dean's edginess - wish we'd seen more of that throughout the episode - and Sam doing what he's able to and what Dean will (grudgingly) allow to offer comfort.
That's one of those episodes that just feels 'broken' at the end. There's so much pain-- mainly for Dean, who was scared going in and devastated coming out-- and it just hangs there unfixed when the episode ends.

Those tempt me like no other-- to bring resolution where it's needed, instead of letting it slide while the chasm grows even wider.

Thank you for your lovely comments, Rachel. :)

crimsonsenya September 5 2006, 07:48:57 UTC

Incredibly lovely and intimate. Beautiful images tinted with sorrow and tenderness.

halfshellvenus September 6 2006, 17:00:05 UTC

Incredibly lovely and intimate.

Oooh. *faints dead away from the gorgeousness of that comment*

*revives* I wasn't sure what I was going to get out of this one. I had some different ideas in mind for "H" and "T", but the image for "Illuminated" was written first and it took over the tone for the entire piece.

I had it in mind to write something majorly porny, but the emotional side crept up instead.

So very glad you enjoyed them. :) *cuddles your comments*

anonymous September 5 2006, 11:11:09 UTC

Good drabbles.I'm hyper and happy because I just found out my grandma got the DVDs for me.It's only 7:00 in the morning here.Yay!

halfshellvenus September 6 2006, 17:01:12 UTC

Wow. That's some grandma you have there. And she knows how to start the day off right, too!

Thank you. :D

dc_longwing September 5 2006, 12:22:37 UTC

Gorgeous. Achingly lovely.
Thanks so much for these and the other drabbles you've been posting lately. I've enjoyed them all.
DC

halfshellvenus September 6 2006, 17:07:41 UTC

Thank you, DC. :) I think this set is the only one that becomes really right in the end-- though the ache is definitely there along the way.

It's just take me forever to catch up on those prompts, because of the vacation. But I'm finally there! And I like the results, even though most of them were 'late.' :)

Good to hear from you again. :D