LJ Idol Season Nine: "Red" (Home Game)

Mar 05, 2015 12:52

Red
idol season nine | week 40 | 483 words
Wolf Ticket (Home game ( Read more... )

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bleodswean March 5 2015, 20:55:54 UTC
Ooooooooooooooooh! This is EXCELLENT!!! A wolf ticket to ride! Great work here, your descriptions of the wolf high were palpable!

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halfshellvenus March 5 2015, 20:57:41 UTC
I cannot believe how fast you read this!

The prompt just sent me to this idea right away-- not exactly crack, but if there were a semi-tragic version of crack, this might be it.

Glad you liked it, and thanks for reading!

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jexia March 6 2015, 02:17:19 UTC
This has great imagery - you're always good at that.

I especially liked "The world is vivid and amazing, and you could practically eat it alive. "

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halfshellvenus March 6 2015, 02:34:09 UTC
Thank you!

That was one of those things that struck me as being very different in being a wolf rather than a sheep. That enhanced hearing, smell, and taste would be such a rush if it wasn't what you're used to, and that added feeling of strength and power might give you exactly that viewpoint of taking what you want, when you want it, because the wolf simply can.

Now I feel a little creepy for having gotten into that so much, but I blame it on the story. It's better than thinking in 'frog'!

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jexia March 6 2015, 02:38:49 UTC
...mmm...flies...

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halfshellvenus March 6 2015, 04:17:26 UTC
And swampiness. And cool, cool water and refreshing rain, and fat, tasty minnows.

That totally was a story, and it took me weeks to shake that frog POV out of my head. :O

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i_17bingo March 8 2015, 07:47:55 UTC
When it's over, you're already dreaming about the next time.

What an awesome idea--black-market lycanthropy! This starts out sounding like fun, but then you gradually ramp up the horror of it, and it doesn't sound like fun anymore...

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halfshellvenus March 9 2015, 06:57:09 UTC
I liked the idea that the whole "wolf high" could be so similar to many drug experiences, right down to the point where you're doing things you regret later and yet you're already addicted.

That the sheep was the addict was just an extra twist of the knife. ;)

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tsuki_no_bara March 9 2015, 04:58:22 UTC
i meant to read this a lot sooner than now. >.< and i love it! the addiction of the wolf shifter. the descriptions of the world from the wolf's pov are really great - and you can understand how someone could get addicted to it - and the last couple lines especially are fabulous.

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halfshellvenus March 9 2015, 06:58:50 UTC
Thank you! I really wanted to work the parallels between any drug-enhanced high and addiction and the actual prompt here-- the idea of becoming the wolf, getting caught up in all of the "more" and being unable to quit...

even when what you're doing is all the more wrong because of who you are. :O

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