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Prison Break Gen Fiction: "Unplanned Obstacles"

Sep 05, 2012 12:09

Title: Unplanned Obstacles
Author: HalfshellVenus
Characters: Michael, Lincoln (Gen)
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Summary: Michael's patience has its limits.
Author's Notes: For the uncuffmybrother 7th year anniversary challenge.
Also for prisonbreak100 ("Life") and 5_prompts ( Table 31, "Feeling overwhelmed").

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( Normally, Michael was an articulate man... )

prisonbreak100, my_fic, ml_gen, michael_lincoln, 5_prompts, pb_gen

Comments 4

heliokleia September 6 2012, 21:59:35 UTC

Hahaha... love it, my dear Mme Venus; what a cute & funny little story.
- Because it always gets interesting when Mikey's finally loosing his temper and Linc's the calm one, at once, hehe...^^
*grins hugely*

So thank you very much for writing & sharing this lovely little Linc & Mikey scene, my dear Mme Venus, it was - as always - a big pleasure to read.
*huggles*
Take care, old friend.
♥

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halfshellvenus September 6 2012, 23:57:35 UTC

Glad it gave you a chuckle! :D

Still hoping to get something slashier out, but nothing happens quickly these days!

clair_de_lune September 8 2012, 13:33:45 UTC

LOL. We - well, I, at least - tend to see Michael as the quiet one and Lincoln as hot-tempered, and yet this is so in-character, because Michael can lose it sometimes, and it's not pretty when it happens.
I also like how you used words that make the sound car sound 'human' (act of defiance, mutiny), hence a personal enemy for Michael *g*
And the older brother vibes... ♥

halfshellvenus September 8 2012, 16:56:30 UTC

because Michael can lose it sometimes, and it's not pretty when it happens.
Exactly! So rational, so collected... until he isn't, and then he just goes.

hence a personal enemy for Michael
People are bad (and mysterious) enough, I'm sure, but when machines don't follow their primary function? Death.Rage. :0

Glad you liked it, and thanks for reading! :D