Supernatural FanFiction: Truths Spoken in Anger, Chapter 4

[halfshellvenus]

Author: HalfshellVenus
Category: Sam/Dean (Slash)
Rating: R
Spoilers: Skin (but mostly AU)
Disclaimer: Not mine. Wish they were.
Archive: Ask first

x-x-x-x-x Chapter 4: To The Victor Go The Spoils x-x-x-x-x

Comments

[sylph_ironlight]

oooh, I like it! Definitely worth the extra chaps! Nicely done!

[halfshellvenus]

Thank you! I just knew there was more I could do with this, but after I started again and got Chapter 2 and it STILL wasn't going to the slashy, I had to wait awhile longer).

Two months. Must be a record for me. Well, at least it was "complete" beforehand. :-)

[sorrelchestnut]

I love the additional chapters. So sweet and happy and them. Loved this.

[halfshellvenus]

Wonderful to hear, especially after such a big lag.

I think that 4-chapter Genfic I wrote might actually have made expanding this easier. Because I don't really write ChapterFic, even now. I so envy those who can.

[sorrelchestnut]

Eh. I envy those who can do a decent one-shot, though I'm getting better at it. My stories still tend to morph into multi-part monstrosities, though, which is something of a pain in the ass.

[halfshellvenus]

Nice to meet you, Yin. I'm Yang. If only we could balance each other!

I have such a hard time NOT doing one-shots. I tend to think in the smaller form. Heck, I just did a couple of Prison Break fics that probably aren't more than 300-400 words. But the idea was complete, and well-explained, and so anything more would be fluff.

The monstrosity here for me was that I couldn't do this follow-on in just 1 extra chapter. But as soon as I quit fixating on that, the problem solved itself. The 4-chapter thing must have broken my resistance.

It's funny how our minds work in such different directions. I can't ever see myself conceiving of something like "Don't Pay The Ferryman," which maygra didn't seem to post until it was finished-- all 13 chapters of it. The ficSpace in my brain is not that big. Not to mention, it is at least 70% filled with PrisonBreak.

[teamane]

I liked it a lOT! :D Very much. :p
I'm very glad you have the 'additional' chapters. Love it.
:D

[halfshellvenus]

Thank you!

I think Dean is even happier now than he was after the standalone Chapter 1, too. Lucky boy. ;-)

[staceey]

Love love these additional chapters, well worth the wait!

"You just like yanking my chain, don't you?" I'd love to yank his chain for him. ;)

[halfshellvenus]

"You just like yanking my chain, don't you?" I'd love to yank his chain for him. ;)

Wouldn't we all? :-D

I could spend a lifetime on those lips alone...

Glad you enjoyed it! Can't believe it took so long to get the follow-on done. (although I wrote some great PrisonBreak stuff, including erotica, during that time :-D)

[acostilow]

Was it worth expanding for the additional chapters? Tell me everything!

Fuck yes. This was funny, and hot, and cute, and other REALLY DAMN COOL STUFF.

I loved it.

The Hotness made you do it (previous comment)? Okay. That works for me. :D

[halfshellvenus]

This was funny, and hot, and cute, and other REALLY DAMN COOL STUFF.

Hee! I like that last part especially.

Now the boys can ride off into the sunset together... stopping to park occasionally and really appreciate the better things in life. :-D

The Impala never had it so good...

[acostilow]

Now the boys can ride off into the sunset together... stopping to park occasionally and really appreciate the better things in life.
Oooh. Are you gonna write that? In lots of detail? In the backseat of the Impala, 'cuz that's hot.

The Impala never had it so good...
The Impala is a freakin' pimp, dude. It's part of the greatest threesome EVER. Except maybe Sam/Dean/my character. But anyway!

[halfshellvenus]

Oooh. Are you gonna write that? In lots of detail? In the backseat of the Impala, 'cuz that's hot.

That backseat should be used SO much more ;-)

I did write the front seat part, in yet another fic inspired by "Skin": Closure

Bench.Seats.Rule. :-D