Comments | halfshellvenus: Supernatural Slash Drabble Set: All The Answers Inside You

halfshellvenus

Supernatural Slash Drabble Set: All The Answers Inside You

Dec 08, 2007 10:52

Title: All The Answers Inside You
Author: HalfshellVenus
Pairing: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Searching for answers and finding something more.
Warnings: Post-Season 2, contains S2 spoilers.
Author's Notes: These are four connected drabbles on elemental themes-a set I've wanted to do for some time. For my spn_25 table, this is "Innocence ( Read more... )

spn_25, wincest, my_fic, sn_slash, drabbles

Comments 36

sunrunnersioned December 8 2007, 19:09:37 UTC

stunning work as always...this fic was just heartbreakingly beautiful!

halfshellvenus December 8 2007, 19:20:45 UTC

Thank you! It was intended for Hell Quarterly's drabble issue, so I put in extra effort. Just now getting to post it up.

Those four combined themes have been on my "todo" list for about a year and a half, and I'm so glad something finally came of them. :)

runedgirl December 8 2007, 19:19:09 UTC

Yes. Me too.

Just three words, but they speak so much for these two who speak so little. Beautiful imagery in this, love the contrast of the ocean evoking eternity with the stark reality of limited time running out for the boys.

Thanks,
Lynsey

halfshellvenus December 8 2007, 19:22:14 UTC

Just three words, but they speak so much for these two who speak so little.
Oh, and so often what they say is the wrong thing when it comes to each other.

love the contrast of the ocean evoking eternity with the stark reality of limited time running out for the boys.
I love that you noticed that! ♥

aeroport_art December 8 2007, 21:48:20 UTC

the ocean evoking eternity with the stark reality of limited time
She might've picked up on that but I hadn't! Yay for literature and all it's nuances. I just think it's funny that in my comment I say how the ocean's a great metaphor, and then I go and miss the point completely >.> My bad!

halfshellvenus December 9 2007, 20:46:18 UTC

and then I go and miss the point completely >.> My bad!
Hee! Nobody's perfect. ;)

aynslee December 8 2007, 20:57:10 UTC

The imagery here was breathtaking! Beautiful.

halfshellvenus December 9 2007, 20:46:53 UTC

Thank you, Aynslee! I really enjoyed writing to the imagery from the prompts as well as to the emotions and the angst here. :)

montmorency December 8 2007, 21:26:14 UTC

Oh so sweet and lovely. I could hear the ocean and feel the moonlight.

halfshellvenus December 9 2007, 20:47:12 UTC

Ooh, I love this kind of feedback. Thank you! :)

yume_odori December 8 2007, 21:40:44 UTC

that hurts, but it's so beautiful.

Yes.

Me too.

ouch.

thank you for sharing this with us!

halfshellvenus December 9 2007, 20:48:22 UTC

ouch.

It's like you can feel those silent words falling into a void of years and thinking, "This all could have happened sooner." I ache with happiness for them that they got to that point, and also with pain for all the lost time finding it.