Prison Break Gen Fiction: By All These Lost Tomorrows

Oct 05, 2007 11:16

Title: By All These Lost Tomorrows
Author: HalfshellVenus
Character: Kellerman (Gen, Drama)
Rating: PG
Summary: When a man's purpose is gone-has twisted and collapsed down inside of him-what else is left for him to be?
Author's Notes: My second story for pbficsurvivor, and also for philosophy_20 for the prompt of "Loss."

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He didn't used to be that man. )

kellerman, philosophy_20, pb_gen

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heliokleia October 5 2007, 20:12:20 UTC
THE MAGNIFICENT BASTARD IS BACK!!

What a great delight - my favourite ex-Secret-Service-Agent is back! - YAY!!! Thank you, dear, for not forgetting HIM!

But, au contraire, Madame - I do not believe that a few simple bullets will stop HIM...
A few days ago I saw the UK special for s03 and in the last line before the end, the narrator teased:

>IS THIS REALLY THE DEAD OF PAUL KELLERMAN?<

He's comming back!! He's comming back!! He's comming back!!

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halfshellvenus October 9 2007, 07:22:53 UTC
I call Kellerman "the chuckleheaded sociopath." He was not a good person in any way, but he was vastly entertaining and very sharp. And damn but I miss him!

A few days ago I saw the UK special for s03 and in the last line before the end, the narrator teased:
>IS THIS REALLY THE DEAD OF PAUL KELLERMAN?<
Sometimes I let myself hope just for a bit... but after seeing him on his new TV show as a main character, the hope died a little.

Glad you liked the story, though! :D

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halfshellvenus October 9 2007, 07:26:09 UTC
(and yes, yes, it was supposed to be sooper-sekrit but I know you're writing too well now)

*is horrified* *vows to change-up style liek whoa in near future!* *ponders whether just writing crack all the time will achieve the same result* :0

Wonderful stuff!
:D I'm glad you liked it! Even though we posted these in a super-secret group, the writers from EITHER team really can't comment on them, so it's nice to get some feedback! We didn't really get any individual feedback on the stories in the comm posting, as I recall.

Ah, Kellerman-- you've gotten more stories out of me than I ever expected. ♥

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asolitaryraven January 25 2008, 09:57:31 UTC
This is really great. I fell in love with the character of Paul Kellerman during most of the scenes you wrote about here, and IMO you managed to write his thoughts perfectly.

=)

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halfshellvenus February 11 2008, 23:34:04 UTC
Oh, thank you so much!

I never thought he'd grow on me as much as he did from his appearances in Season 1. But Season 2-- with the whole "Lance" detour, and then those scenes in Gila and the weariness that takes over him as he realizes that Carolyn is just using him after all... can't resist the man now.

You might enjoy the Kellerman/Sara one, also under my "Kellerman" tag. Though that one is crack, not drama. :0

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rekindle956 April 11 2010, 07:35:26 UTC
It's been a while, but I really enjoyed reading this fic. Thank you.

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halfshellvenus April 12 2010, 20:22:32 UTC
Thank you so much! Even nicer to find that it's still a good read, years later! :)

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