This is not the haiku you're looking for...
I gacked this from deirdre_c, and this could not be less like me. What it is is John Winchester. It's made up from part of a recent drabble I wrote on him. The phrase "puny-ass" is so fitting for John's POV, and SO very wrong for mine.
OK, no table. The code isn't working. Here's what I got, though:
can i help you he
says but inside he thinks your
puny ass problems
Take Eleven was....
i am here his
body shook inside the door
with his shirt off and
which ends a sentence with "and". Dude, your haiku-program sux!
Seriously, you'd think my journal was entirely full of random. These are entry snippets, and they're more sentence-fragment than haiku.
Haiku is an art! Software scrambling not so much in this case, though I cannot resist taking a quiz from a site called "angrygoats.net". :0
I've always understood haiku to follow the formula of "17 syllables over three lines divided into 5-7-5", so here's a real one I wrote years ago:
Funeral witness
leaves the muted rose behind.
Petals scatter grief.
Prison Break fandom written just now:Inside iron and gray
souls die slowly. Leave before
spirits, bodies fail.
Supernatural fandom: Destiny finds you
despite killing it, running,
forcing promises.
Can't say that they're any good, but they are definitely more focused. :)
OK, no table. The code isn't working. Here's what I got, though:
can i help you he
says but inside he thinks your
puny ass problems
Take Eleven was....
i am here his
body shook inside the door
with his shirt off and
which ends a sentence with "and". Dude, your haiku-program sux!
Seriously, you'd think my journal was entirely full of random. These are entry snippets, and they're more sentence-fragment than haiku.
Haiku is an art! Software scrambling not so much in this case, though I cannot resist taking a quiz from a site called "angrygoats.net". :0
I've always understood haiku to follow the formula of "17 syllables over three lines divided into 5-7-5", so here's a real one I wrote years ago:
Funeral witness
leaves the muted rose behind.
Petals scatter grief.
Prison Break fandom written just now:Inside iron and gray
souls die slowly. Leave before
spirits, bodies fail.
Supernatural fandom: Destiny finds you
despite killing it, running,
forcing promises.
Can't say that they're any good, but they are definitely more focused. :)