Straight Flush fic

[halfdutch]

Title: Straight Flush
Summary: Strip poker!
Rating: PG-13
Note: Written (just barely in the nick of time) for the Truth or Dare Fic-a-thon. And any poker players out there will know I’m just a novice. Still, it’s really more about the *stripping,* right?

Comments

[halfdutch]

Great! You're very welcome!

[driveshaft4ever]

*cackles evilly* YES!! Exactly what I wanted! Heeheehee...

[halfdutch]

Yay! Glad it hit the spot. Thanks for starting the contest!

[tears_of_nienna]

Oh my God, what an ending! *squees like icon*

Strip poker always ends up like that; you captured the deflating mood really, really well. And then the end...*reads last paragraphs ten times*

[halfdutch]

Thanks. So glad you liked it! *g*

[foxxcub]

Ack, you evil little devil!! Where's my damn het scene, for pete's sake?! ;D
I laughed all the way through, it's fabulous! Seriously, though, there's a major lack of make-out scenes here. Drinking+strip poker+hotties=HORNINESS. Hee, just a thought ;D

[foxxcub]

You're my first fic review, BTW! Woot!

[halfdutch]

And then Jack and Kate went back to his cave and made out ... with Shannon. "I didn't catch the end of that strip tease," he said huskily.
THE END. ;->

You're right, I was possessed by the slash beast here. I gotta get on some het stuff soon. I just didn't see this turning into an orgy. I guess I could have had the group dwindle a little more slowly.

[foxxcub]

Mwahaha..."And Boone gave one last wistful look upon Charlie, longing to hear the whisper of a British moan..."
Guh, what have you done to me?! I know have slash on the brain, you jerk ;D
**rushes off to immerse herself in Skate smut**

[halfdutch]

Thanks! Read above comment for plans for an alternate, non-slash ending. Because I aim to please. :-)