More Than This (Jack/James) NC-17

[halfdutch]

Title: More Than This
Pairing: Jack/James
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jack wants more from James
Note: Follow up to Visiting Hours. Written for the fanfic100 prompt "Not enough."

Comments

[littlehands]

*dies*

The moment for cohearent thought is long gone...Duuuude! *gigglesquee* My little woobies and their pain - and the hottness, ohhh the hotness. I will return with a better review, just such a treat on a rainy sunday!

[halfdutch]

Awwww yay. Thanks! Glad to bring some pr0n to cheer you up on a rainy day! ;-D

[hkath]

Um. I love you? I've read it twice already. You just... there's so much here that I can't even begin. So much emotion.

“Fuck, Jack, fuck, God you feel so good,” he says and it occurs to him he should be saying something more original but his brain has kind of stopped working and all he can think of is just this -- how Jack feels and how it’s the best fucking thing in the world. Jack is his and nothing can ever change that now.

*is slain*

[halfdutch]

Ohhhh, thank you, babe! And hee, I was still catching plenty of typos in that time. *coughs*

I'm so thrilled at this reponse! *goes off and does porny victory dance*

*kisses you long and hard*

[holycitygirl]

Even if I wasn't on painmeds this would have completely blissed me out.

“What do you mean?” The hurt look flits across Jack’s face again and for a second, James wonders what he ever saw in him. He’s too sensitive, too ... raw.

This is particular I found so true and such an awesome observation.

Beautiful. Thanks, I needed it.

[halfdutch]

Awww, thanks hon! I've been there myself, shifting from annoyance back to attraction in the space of a few minutes. Relationships, especially charged ones like this, can be so minute by minute!

So glad you liked it!

[eponine119]

Wow. Just...wow. I knew that when they finally got back together it would be fantastic and intense but this story is beyond what I could have imagined. You did just the perfect job with them, their pain and their personalities and their love for each other.

I thought this was just the most painful line, but it summed up so well all the things they were going through:
”You drink. I drink. I fuck someone else. It doesn’t help does it?”

But then by the end that almost doesn't seem to matter anymore, as though their getting together could make all the rest of it go away.

[halfdutch]

Oh thanks so much! *blushes* I'm so glad this meets with your approval. ;D

I thought that line was harsh, but true. They're both trying so hard not to be together - the way they tried so hard to hang onto their individual secrets - but they just can't be apart. (And we won't let them!) I like to think they get each other and need each other like no one else in their lives ever has or maybe ever will. And of course, that always leads to hot sex! And what next...? I don't know!

I'm so thrilled you liked it this much!

[zenana7]

Fuck.

“Best fuckin’ sex of my life. I thought my heart was gonna stop.”

'bout sums it up. Best fucking scene evah. Wow.

Also, incredibly well crafted.

And, unlike James, I can go back and reread it all over again!

[halfdutch]

WOO! Thank you! (As my head swells to dangerous levels.) :-D

And I still need to go back and read your J/J fics!

[halfdutch]

Wait, I should have used this icon instead, LOL.

[zenana7]

I'll take 'em both (licks lips)!