Comments | halfdutch: You're On (Jack/James)

halfdutch

You're On (Jack/James) - NC-17

Aug 14, 2005 21:27

Title: You’re On
Pairing: Jack/James (High school AU)
Summary: So much for having the place all to himself.
Rating: NC-17
Note: Set shortly after foxxcub's J/J fic, The Guilty Party. Draws on elements of my fic Reunion, while contradicting others.

( 'C’mon, Shephard. That as fast as you can go?' )

lost_fic, jack/james

Comments 52

foxxcub August 15 2005, 04:54:23 UTC

*MARRIES FIC*

halfdutch August 15 2005, 05:00:09 UTC

AWWWWWW! Yeah! Bigamy! *woot*

*luff*

foxxcub August 15 2005, 05:06:29 UTC

Yeah! Bigamy!

And now I shall move to Utah and finally go to bed, seriously.

halfdutch August 15 2005, 05:13:06 UTC

Hee!

*packs your bag and tucks you in for the night* ;-D

strutterms August 15 2005, 05:26:28 UTC

*marries you and has an affair with teh fic* I could marry the fic, but YOU can actually WRITE more fic. *nodnod*

*random guh* *squee* *melts into a puddle*

Okay, I'm done...no, no wait, not quite...*snogs and glomps you*

Okay...NOW I'm done. *nodnodnod* :D

halfdutch August 15 2005, 05:42:11 UTC

Good thing it's such a slutty little fic. ;-D

Thank you!!

arabella_hope August 15 2005, 06:05:04 UTC

Completely, utterly, converted

How is it that I can adore this AU more than anything else? I so wish I had more skills so I could contribute b/c this is the best stuff ever!

So missed my LJ all week, but yeah!to come back to some Jack/James! LOVED it! Esp. the unsure!James and the shirt stealing/hide-n-seek. So high school. So perfect!

halfdutch August 15 2005, 17:55:44 UTC

Awww. Thanks. I love this AU too. Hurrah for foxxcub for creating it .

arabella_hope August 15 2005, 18:12:45 UTC

I know. I, like, worship at her feet...along w/ you and uberaeryn, of course.

halfdutch August 15 2005, 19:53:39 UTC

Oh, BLUSH!

;-D

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siren_mage August 15 2005, 06:18:50 UTC

God, I love this AU so much. I didn't even know it was possible to love an AU this much. Yep. That's all I guess. Love it, love it, lo~ove it. ^.~

halfdutch August 15 2005, 17:56:27 UTC

Awwww, aren't you sweet? Thank you!!

eponine119 August 15 2005, 06:24:23 UTC

Yay, more Jack & James! This was really good. Very steamy in the shower scene, and I like the bit of vulnerability showcased in James's inexperience. How he's all bravado all this time but then he doesn't know what to do. Jack passing out was a surprise, but it seemed real, and I liked how it pushed James back into his outsider status.

There's a couple nitpicky off details in here, like James starts out in jeans and ends up in sweatpants, and it seems early for key cards, but who's complaining?

Loved it!

halfdutch August 15 2005, 17:59:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad that worked for you. The James POV was a little trickier than writing from Jack's.

Ooops! Fixed. I wrote this in several stages (it was really being a bear), so I'm not surprised there were some continuity errors! As for the keycards, yeah, I think they probably came along a little later but an acual key seemed like it would take to long to get a door open here. So I cheated.