Fic for shocolate: 'John Lennon and the soul of Yoko Ono.'

Nov 23, 2006 13:27

shocolate requested something with Seamus/Neville, Seamus/Ron or Seamus/Ginny, without anything nasty and with anything nice. I did the best I could: there's Seamus/Neville, and Seamus/Ginny friendship, and a major supporting role played by Ron. Many apologies for the lateness, many salutes to kaalee for the extension, many hugs to florahart for the beta, to oconel for the ( Read more... )

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oconel November 23 2006, 09:17:22 UTC
to oconel for the handholding
Whenever you want :)

The comparison between the Gryffindors and The Beatles is amazing (fun and clever), and makes sense. (And the references all over the fic made me laugh)

I like how you wrote (followed) their friendship through the years, how Neville sees himself (clumsy and a looser) and how Seamus seems to see him in a completely different light; and I also love how you show Seamus trough Neville's eyes (specially how he notices the details about Seamus's family).

(And I liked the parenthesis!)

it’ll be (just like) starting over.

That's the perfect ending :)

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 10:51:22 UTC
I'm sorry about the death! I can't expect why some things in my fic happen, but they have to. Or something.

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oconel November 23 2006, 10:54:53 UTC
Don't worry about it :D

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 10:55:57 UTC
Still, I had this image of Seamus railing against a stormy sky, and I knew exactly why he'd do it.

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oconel November 23 2006, 11:01:31 UTC
The image is beautiful, and I can picture Seamus doing it because of Dean's death. I liked it (though it was a bit of a shock to see him suddenly dead).

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:02:50 UTC
I am sorry about the shock!

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oconel November 23 2006, 11:06:51 UTC
It was just that I wasn't expecting it :D

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:09:35 UTC
"No-one expects the..." You know the rest.

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florahart November 23 2006, 11:21:12 UTC
...multi-partedness of conversations in the comments of your fics?

I always find amusing how you have this big old conversations in your comments. I virtually never do. Heh.

/butting in.

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:22:56 UTC
What do you mean by multi-partedness?

And how else would I talk to people? :O I can't just sit in my cave all the time.

(...You had to mention butts, didn't you.)

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florahart November 23 2006, 11:25:52 UTC
just big ol' strings of comments. I hardly ever have like, conversations in comments of fic. I'm not commenting on wrongness or anything. Just sayin.

Butts? Where?

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:28:33 UTC
Oh, I thought you meant the conversations in my fic were all multi-parted with implicit meaning. No, you were just talking about the fact I am gabby.

Yes, but you are you know, shy and meek compared to me.

I'd be blatantly obvious and point to your icon, but I believe it's not nice to chat you up in the comments of someone else's gift fic.

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florahart November 23 2006, 11:32:59 UTC
Oooo implicit meaning. This is like, literary-concept porn. Or something. Way better than chatting up.

*meeks*

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:38:39 UTC
You are just one big ol' geek, and them there long words get you goin'.

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florahart November 23 2006, 11:42:59 UTC
Nah, antidisestablishmentarianism doesn't do much for me.

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nothingbutfic November 23 2006, 11:44:11 UTC
That is a stupid word.

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