31_Days, Fic 21: I Don't Like Chocolate
So. I wrote another Autor story.
...I hate it. D= I don't think it came out well at all. I don't think Fakir is in character, Autor is waaaay too whiny, he's really annoying (although I can't say that's out of character for him), Pique seemed sort of OOC as well...it was long...dialogue heavy...it's DULL. But I WROTE IT, so it's PART OF THE CHALLENGE, DANG IT! XD;;;
...So. It's a Autor/Pique/Fakir love triangle. I blame Manda for that, just so you know. XD;;;
...Okay. I'm tired of even thinking about it. I'm done with the story for today. Who knows? Maybe once I come back to this I'll like it. Or at least be able to see how I can fix it.
But tomorrow. I'm tired. I'm done. XD;;
Title: I Don’t Like Chocolate
Day/Theme: May 21: the chocolate revolution begins
Series: Princess Tutu
Character/Pairing: Autor/Pique/Fakir. (I blame Manda.)
Rating: PG
( It had started with Autor inviting himself over to Fakir's home. )
...I hate it. D= I don't think it came out well at all. I don't think Fakir is in character, Autor is waaaay too whiny, he's really annoying (although I can't say that's out of character for him), Pique seemed sort of OOC as well...it was long...dialogue heavy...it's DULL. But I WROTE IT, so it's PART OF THE CHALLENGE, DANG IT! XD;;;
...So. It's a Autor/Pique/Fakir love triangle. I blame Manda for that, just so you know. XD;;;
...Okay. I'm tired of even thinking about it. I'm done with the story for today. Who knows? Maybe once I come back to this I'll like it. Or at least be able to see how I can fix it.
But tomorrow. I'm tired. I'm done. XD;;
Title: I Don’t Like Chocolate
Day/Theme: May 21: the chocolate revolution begins
Series: Princess Tutu
Character/Pairing: Autor/Pique/Fakir. (I blame Manda.)
Rating: PG
( It had started with Autor inviting himself over to Fakir's home. )