Title: Seek and Ye Shall Find
Pairing: Jack/Boone, sort of Jack/Boone/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2731
Beta: The glorious
gregoria44Summary: Sequel to
Watching and Waiting. Boone and Jack decide to get their own back.
A/N: Written for
janie_tangerine for the
lostsquee luau. She was looking for more Jack/Boone fic, with the prompt of 'hearts and minds'. Also for the people
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Boone knew he looked turned on; he couldn't help it. Here he was in the jungle, the only one with any clothing on, between two naked and very masculine, excited men. He allowed his smile to grow, wondering what Kate would think if she could see them.
Ha. This was glorious.
"Fuck," Sawyer's voice broke through Boone's sex-filled haze, "You two are fuckin' hotter than July, dammit. Look what you've done to me."
Oh, I do understand you here indeed *sigh*.
Seriously, I love every comma of this one. You write Boone so incredibly well and I so loved his relationship with Jack here. That paragraph of how it started was great, so sweet and yay for the hearts and minds! Then you had to put Sawyer in and I never surely mind some Sawyer -shakes head- and woah. That was some hot sex indeed, the temperature flew at least ten grades up!
I loved the jealousy flickers here, that part with Sawyer jerking himself off was something hot indeed and I quote the comment above me regarding the actual Jack/Boone sex as leaving me very incoherent. Woah, there really isn't enough of this pairing around *sigh* and this was done just so well and uhm, I'm incoherent. The ending was pretty awesome too and well, this was a pretty incredible package altogether, thank you so much! I loved every comma of it indeed ♥ ♥.
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Thank you; your comments are so incredible! I really wasn't sure how well I had Boone, but I've been practising elsewhere, and I think I'm getting to grips with him, so to speak *g* And Sawyer, well, he's like Colgate toothpaste in this part of the world, which means 'he does get in'!!!
I'm extremely glad that the jealousy bits worked too, and that you think the sex was hot! I'll happily write these boys some more, don't worry! ;-)
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