Lost fic: luau 2008 for Queen janie_tangerine

Aug 14, 2008 16:51

Title: Seek and Ye Shall Find
Pairing: Jack/Boone, sort of Jack/Boone/Sawyer
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2731
Beta: The glorious gregoria44
Summary: Sequel to Watching and Waiting. Boone and Jack decide to get their own back.
A/N: Written for janie_tangerine for the lostsquee luau. She was looking for more Jack/Boone fic, with the prompt of 'hearts and minds'. Also for the people ( Read more... )

lost: boone/jack, lost luau, fps, lost fic, lost: sawyer

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janie_tangerine August 19 2008, 21:12:56 UTC
OMG yeeeeeeessssss. Hear my squeeing, hear it! ;) Okay, before I forget..

Boone knew he looked turned on; he couldn't help it. Here he was in the jungle, the only one with any clothing on, between two naked and very masculine, excited men. He allowed his smile to grow, wondering what Kate would think if she could see them.

Ha. This was glorious.

"Fuck," Sawyer's voice broke through Boone's sex-filled haze, "You two are fuckin' hotter than July, dammit. Look what you've done to me."

Oh, I do understand you here indeed *sigh*.

Seriously, I love every comma of this one. You write Boone so incredibly well and I so loved his relationship with Jack here. That paragraph of how it started was great, so sweet and yay for the hearts and minds! Then you had to put Sawyer in and I never surely mind some Sawyer -shakes head- and woah. That was some hot sex indeed, the temperature flew at least ten grades up!

I loved the jealousy flickers here, that part with Sawyer jerking himself off was something hot indeed and I quote the comment above me regarding the actual Jack/Boone sex as leaving me very incoherent. Woah, there really isn't enough of this pairing around *sigh* and this was done just so well and uhm, I'm incoherent. The ending was pretty awesome too and well, this was a pretty incredible package altogether, thank you so much! I loved every comma of it indeed ♥ ♥.

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haldoor_honey August 21 2008, 09:10:00 UTC
Oh! I'm so very very glad you liked this *hugs* (and that 'finger' to Kate was far too hard to resist *g*).

Thank you; your comments are so incredible! I really wasn't sure how well I had Boone, but I've been practising elsewhere, and I think I'm getting to grips with him, so to speak *g* And Sawyer, well, he's like Colgate toothpaste in this part of the world, which means 'he does get in'!!!

I'm extremely glad that the jealousy bits worked too, and that you think the sex was hot! I'll happily write these boys some more, don't worry! ;-)

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