[exo] three one-shots; pg
Three short pieces for EXO
Chanyeol/Baekhyun; Xiumin/Lu Han; Kris/Lay
Song title prompts
( The process starts off with a lilt; a slight interruption to the steady in-out, in-out stream of air flowing from his trachea to his lungs, a millisecond pause, and then Baekhyun exhales as usual. )
Chanyeol/Baekhyun; Xiumin/Lu Han; Kris/Lay
Song title prompts
( The process starts off with a lilt; a slight interruption to the steady in-out, in-out stream of air flowing from his trachea to his lungs, a millisecond pause, and then Baekhyun exhales as usual. )
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But! Kris' hands should not be double the size of Lay's, that's not possible! Even my cousin's hard, which are freakishly large, are max two inches bigger than mine. IMAGINING DOUBLE SEEMS SO FREAKY /end pointless rant
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Re-reading and so I really reall reallllllllly liked the first one (I just forgot by the time I commented, since I read these as breaks between studying lol)
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curdles
tries to find favorite lines
your writing is just so artistic and gorgeous and graceful, but so emotional. it hurts. i want to breathe for baekhyun (but almost not), i want to be minseoks tongue to obey BCOS CHINESE IS SO HARD, i want i want i want yixings smile for wufan. theyre so real and touching and i just. why jo why ;;;; ♥♥
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i think not oh my god. words are difficult why do they exist ;______; but the thrill of not breathing, having that breath catch and that oh slip from your lips the way it does whenever i see pics of them u___u is ;_____; sigh chinese. SIGH ME TEARING MY OTP APART. oh well /o/ ♥
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also no shush, you are a beautiful writer go away
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When I read that, I literally said out loud, "Who would dump Wu Fan?! Who would dump Wu Fan?! I would never do that!"
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I love all of the drabbles ;A;
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hehe ♥ thank you for reading!
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the last one, my heart is broken;;;; that's an angsty plotline i'm quite fond of, so i'm not even mad that krislay is broken in the end. i'm a masochist what can i say;; also i like it when wu fan is the one pining for yixing. :x but that may be my yixing bias taking over me.
i like how you describe things. i don't find it dragging. it's vivid enough and yet not superfluous, and so i don't just skim over it (which is what i tend to do when dialogue is too far apart with too much description in between;;;) ...maybe this is also why i like your porn.
xiuhan. :c aww minseok don't give up. ;3; lulu will help you always. i remember giving up on trying to learn mandarin a decade ago because it reached the point where i couldn't ignore tones and just 8(( no i couldn't do it.
thank god for that baekyeol on top i'm not sure i could handle three sad drabbles in one post. there is always something sexy with baekyeol and the lack of oxygen, idk *_*
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RIGHT? i love them really but always make things sad >:C and also omg i like it when things are subverted like most people make yixing the one that chases after kris? but her in real life it doesn't work like that not everything in the world is perfect and butterflies and sometimes love will be one sided ;____; sigh yixing bias.
oh ;A; thank you! i try to space it out because walls of text are never fun to read but neither are lines of purely conversation :3
(trust me i can't even chinese i am a fail at my supposed mother language)
....breathplay hmmm HMM? >:D lmao. anyway! thank you for reading you always leave the nicest comments ;A;
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