Comments | halcyon_morn: Souvenir

halcyon_morn

Souvenir

Dec 22, 2008 22:50

My miracle_ss fic for hyperballad. I can't say that it's particularly Christmassy, but if you like fucked up sex...

Souvenir
Pairing: Han Geng/Siwon

( He's nervous enough to be Japanese, but Han Geng's got him pegged as Korean - he has the build of someone who's done military service, and only a Christian would look this guilty. )

!fic, rating: explicit content, fandom: super junior, character: siwon, character: han geng

Comments 77

dailysky December 23 2008, 05:56:57 UTC

Poor Hangeng? No, it's poor Siwon! Siwon has to get married and he's gay. Hangeng is just - well, doing his job. Weep for Siwon, not Hangeng. :'c

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:42:06 UTC

Poor both of them, really, but I'd be inclined to agree with you that Siwon gets the shittier deal-at least Geng won't be lying 24/7 for the rest of his life.

haldir December 23 2008, 06:05:55 UTC

chris.

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:42:19 UTC

HI LINNIE! :DDD

haldir December 23 2008, 06:42:37 UTC

hello, porn machine! :D

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:43:56 UTC

...HOW DID YOU FIND MY SURNAME? D:

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innocently_hot December 23 2008, 06:06:59 UTC

i love this because geng sound so composed and cold...
how dare he did that to shiwon, that fella is going to get married!
there's no love between them but still shihan is hot!

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:43:06 UTC

He just did what Siwon wanted him to do.

I'm glad you liked it. :)

mardigrasmaven December 23 2008, 06:15:40 UTC

Hannie was so professional and cold about it... he totally had Siwon by the balls. This may be kinda fucked up and no where near Christmas-y, but hey... I feel like I just got an early present! And it wasn't even FOR me! XD

"It's ok. It's ok." Siwon's sobs get louder as he begins to grind his hips harder, and Geng can tell that he is close. He brings his mouth to Siwon's ear and whispers, "You can think of this when you have to fuck your wife," and Siwon moans low and comes inside him.
Do you realize how GOOD that line was?! I am seriously freaking out over it.

This was delicious.

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:47:28 UTC

He did. But on the other hand, Siwon totally wanted him to have him by the balls. ;D

I'm glad you liked that line! I liked it, but I wasn't sure it would work, so yes. ♥

mardigrasmaven December 23 2008, 07:00:57 UTC

True that... I mean at first Siwon was holding the towel like he was afraid for his ass... but he needn't have worried. Damn Hannie just worked him... Chinaman's got mad skillz!

Of course I liked it! It was brilliant! ♥ I still don't know what to do with myself after reading it. *flails*

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 15:08:05 UTC

Chinaman's got mad skillz!

True fact. XD

ameliorate23 December 23 2008, 06:34:40 UTC

Wow... that was... powerful.
It was terrible~ But that wasn't poor writing (don't worry^^), that was just the plot. Very sad~ And all effed up~
I didn't really like cold Hankyung, though~
But it wouldn't have been as good, any other way.

halcyon_morn December 23 2008, 06:49:30 UTC

For some reason, I have a hard time writing things that aren't "effed up." I'm...not too worried about it. ;D

And yes, cold Hannie can only work in an AU, because in real life Shihan are sparkly gay rainbow kittens. :D I'm glad you were able to suspend your sense of disbelief for this fic and enjoy.