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hairlip

this was born in the comment box

Jan 22, 2011 20:40

love collectively
jonghyun/minho (shinee). pg, 900 words. time traveler!fic, minho meets 3 selves of jonghyun.

for rebreak because she is cute and fun and i am trying to coerce her into writing more.

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jonghyun, minho

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hairlip January 23 2011, 10:06:55 UTC

thank you :)

jongkeyfan408 January 23 2011, 04:15:53 UTC

I love this <3 the end was so sweet and beautiful ^^
thanks for the read :)

hairlip January 23 2011, 10:07:34 UTC

no problem. thank you for reading.

towelettepower January 23 2011, 06:23:49 UTC

Waaa. ♥ This fantastic. I love et. :3

hairlip January 23 2011, 10:07:56 UTC

what an adorable comment ;_;

jewelry_flower January 23 2011, 12:40:31 UTC

Such a cute and fresh story :D

I just wonder, if you don't mind, why did Minho have to travel time in order to meet Jonghyun?

*whisper* Actually I'm asking for a prequel or sequel of this cute piece *whisper end*

^_^v

hairlip January 24 2011, 12:19:09 UTC

thank you! lol so he can see kid jonghyun and stuff. it just coincided with the prompt really well. SORRY, I DON'T THINK I CAN WRITE A PREQUEL OR A SEQUEL OR ELSE I'LL RUIN MY OTP. but thank you for asking, sobs.

rebreak January 23 2011, 15:01:05 UTC

why is this so gorgeous and sweet and perfect and dedicated to me? ♥ D: fdsgfdl; this is amazing from the part where jonghyun runs to the door naked to the end where he's all "yes, i know you love me :3." EVERYWHERE!!!! i love you, and i mean it. i just want to ! at you, but then i wouldn't do this fic justice at all and um. yeah.

Jonghyun, come back here! Put on some clothes before you answer the door. crying. of course he'd open the door naked. he probably still does, btw. AND SUPER EFFICIENT WASHING TOOLS! ♥

& this part “It does explain the bench and the jersey 5 sizes bigger than you,” Minho smirks.

“Ha ha. Before you think I’m the water boy, I’m waiting for my mom to pick me up. I’ve got better things to do than kick around a ball,” Jonghyun says, facing the clash of colors on the field. idk. i adore this part. jonghyun in the big jersey, serving as the not-waterboy. ;; the team should embrace him and his big eyes and nose and lips! he's perfect - minho knows this.

Minho has the urge to trip Jonghyun with his broom stick, ( ... )

hairlip January 23 2011, 15:10:46 UTC

OMG CAN I JUST SQUEEZE YOU AND YOUR CUTE IU ICON FOREVER. how did you write those whole comment so fast, and know the right things to make me feel happy ;_; GIRL, YOU ALREADY DO THEM JUSTICE. JUST POST UP THE FICS THAT YOU'VE BEEN HIDING.

no, if minho tripped him, IT WOULD CHANGE THE FUTURE. i just imagined jonghyun getting tripped anyway, though.

rebreak January 23 2011, 16:18:18 UTC

I LOVE THIS ICON BECAUSE IT'S MY FACE LIKE 87% OF THE TIME! becaue i'm your wonder woman and i make things happen. ;_; IT'S COS I LOVE YOU AND OMG THEY ARE SO BAD DO NOT MAKE ME PULL OUT THE BAD FICS!!!

BUT IT WOULD BE A GOOD FUTURE! and they can say cheesy things like "you totally fell for me" & "i tripped into love" or you know. something. :DDDD!

hairlip January 23 2011, 21:08:50 UTC

so you pull a coy face 87% of the time (wow it took me a long time to find the percent key) LOL YES CHANGE YOUR NAME TO WONDERWOMAN, IT FITS YOU BETTER. OR FAIRY GIRL.

lmao, you are so creative and cheesy enough to clog arteries.

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