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serenitymeimei June 3 2008, 00:54:45 UTC
Mmmmm, good fic. *reads some more*

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carorules June 3 2008, 02:32:41 UTC
Awesome fic, you are such a tease! woah!! very sexy!!

I think you missed a word there:
I want nothing more than to get you ____ that bed of mine
and
She'll be lucky to ____ till lunchtime

Sorry, I just want the fic to be perfectly perfect ;)

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hahn_lover18 June 3 2008, 04:04:46 UTC
Hey thanks so much for the feedback! Yea, you are soo right, we did miss a word or two! Any interest in being a beta reader for us??

All our thanks,

Abby/Ally

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this is amazing! helloitsh June 3 2008, 05:28:07 UTC
when are you guys writing more, i'm addicted!
hopefully soon i can't wait much longer!

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hollysamantha June 3 2008, 06:49:10 UTC
awww I love you guys so much for the awesomeness. x

I so can not wait for the next chapter! Erica breaking at work = so hot!

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whitelder June 3 2008, 08:10:38 UTC
ok more thats an order :D

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somedayxxbway June 3 2008, 23:01:47 UTC
This is HOT...I want more! I loved it!! Update soon, please :)

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shutterloubug June 4 2008, 03:57:13 UTC
I just found this story and read all four parts...and I absolutely LOVE it. LOVE! Especially this last chapter...whew..*fans self*. Could these two be any hotter?

I really like your writing style too. If you're first-timers at this, you're doing an amazing job!

Can't wait for more!

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hahn_lover18 June 8 2008, 22:43:16 UTC
Just wanted to let you know I just updated again! Thanks for all of your support!!

Enjoy ; )

Abby

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