Fic Commentary: Mistletoe and Reindeer Antlers

[h_loquacious]

Commentary for vanrigsby for Mistletoe and Reindeer Antlers. This is one of the last of my commentaries. I think I just have Persuasion left, which could end up being interesting... Anyway, here we go.
A/N: Written for Yana (aka. Yaba) as part of the jello-forever secret Santa. The prompt was for a holiday Jane/Lisbon story, possibly featuring a

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[vanrigsby]

*applauds* Great job!

Hehehe. Well, I love this. I do.

Because Van Pelt would be the one to wear a Santa hat. She just would.
Love that line. Of course she would.

Because the pair of them were always about as subtle as a brick through a window on this front.
And this line made me laugh so. Mostly because it was true, but I do love the way you've written it.

I enjoyed reading this, very very much so. Thank you for brightening my day :D

[h_loquacious]

Well, I'm glad you liked your commentary. I had fun with it.

[vanrigsby]

And I had fun reading it :)