From Blue Sky - Chapter 5/15

[h_itoshi]

Title: From Blue Sky
Status: 5/15
Fandom: Hey! Say! JUMP
Pairing: None. Main characters are Yabu, Hikaru, Yamada and Chinen.
Overall rating: PG-15 for minor character death and depictions of violence
Warnings: AU. I made Chinen 11 years old which is what the plot revolves around.
Wordcount: 3780

Summary: "He's a cute boy, isn't he?" Takaki says, his

Comments

[sanadas_sanity]

I WAS SO EXCITED TO SEE THIS POP UP ON MY FEED WHEN I GOT HOME!

Part of me is just sitting in anticipation for everything to be revealed cause it's slowly killing me here. Part of me wants to shout and shake you around a little for making the reveal so long.

But I do like how Yamada is slowly softening up to everyone, especially Chinen. Before we only saw him brush off questions and not answer them. Slowly but surely he's letting Yabu, Hikaru and even Chinen in (maybe he finds Chinen cute deep down? Who knows).

Also I appreciate all of the little details thrown in here. Especially with Yabu not sleeping a lot. t makes me wonder if he's got a lot of demons locked in his closet or what.

It sounds bad, too, but I'm waiting for someone to recognize Chinen. This journey has almost been too easy for them....either way, I can't wait until the next update!

[h_itoshi]

YAY

I'm sorry for making you wait, but there's a need for character development too haha. But there will be backstory very soon, I promise. You won't have to shout at me xD <3

Things never go as easy as expected, do they~?

[sanadas_sanity]

I knowwwwww deep down I'm just an impatient person xD like I even get too excited to post fics and I do it before I should. And I'll trust you! I know you had to spread some stuff out if this fic was going to be 15 chapters long.

they really don't. they're definitely going to hit some kind of snag along the way

[h_itoshi]

Haha awww xD I go the opposite way with fic posting and wait for effing ever to post things oops.

Heh originally this fic was supposed to be ten chapters :x