I'm setting us in stone (piece by piece) - Steve/Danny - NC-17

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Author: tailoredshirt
Recipient: ember_firedrake
Title: I'm setting us in stone (piece by piece)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Summary: After Steve and Danny are exposed to an untested drug during a raid on a pharmaceutical company's warehouse, they experience some unusual side effects.
Warnings: chemical-induced sex, marathon sex, rimming, dirty talk, lots of hand-

Comments

[tailoredshirt]

Thank you so much! :)

[ember_firedrake]

Oh my god, I loved this, thank you so much! I just...gah, their banter in the beginning had me laughing out loud! Their voices were spot on. XD

"You want, like, an itemized list?"

and

"It's true, you are very sensitive," Steve agrees.

jfkdl;jfkdlajfkdl;s just perfect.

And the sex was everything I could have wanted and more. *fans self* Hnnnnggghh...fantastically hot, and I love how underneath all that raw need there was a really strong sense of the emotion and affection between them. <3333 Thank you so, so much.

[tailoredshirt]

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! :))) I usually write more banter than porn, but this was the prompt that called out to me most. I had a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad it was what you wanted. :D

[simplyn2deep]

Between this and watching/listening to Deep in the Valley, I'm so utterly gone!

damn

[tailoredshirt]

Hee, thank you!

[imaginarycircus]

♥

[tailoredshirt]

<333

[deepbluemermaid]

Jesus Christ, that was...guh. It'd be perfect as pure porn, but it's not just that. It's all the unspoken things between them, all the little details, Danny's fantastic mental voice, the clear picture we get of Steve through his eyes - all so beautifully done. Kudos, you brilliant person :)

[tailoredshirt]

Thank you so much! I really struggled with how to make this more than porn and how to let those unspoken bits come though, so I'm really glad it worked for you! :)