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Ha-neul's Outfits in this Chapter h311ybean June 30 2010, 17:00:53 UTC
Re: Ha-neul's Outfits in this Chapter dawnfarie July 4 2010, 06:51:01 UTC
CUPCAKE EARRINGS I WANT @+@

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Re: Ha-neul's Outfits in this Chapter h311ybean July 4 2010, 15:11:41 UTC
Hee! I love those, too.

If you look at her outfits, Ha-neul has a thing for cute little earrings. :) I can just imagine a certain guitarist giving her a whole bagful for her birthday...

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Re: Ha-neul's Outfits in this Chapter dawnfarie July 5 2010, 13:43:59 UTC
Ahhhhh that I did not notice.... but looking back at your collection, I also noticed she has the Harajuku girls' earrings? I love those too but the cupcakes are cuter XD

Hehehe yeah either that or one random cute pair of lil earrings for every day/month he knows her! :P

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Good Job! miko_hime_neko June 30 2010, 21:53:01 UTC
Really good chapters...

I found out your fic yesterday and read all of it today =D I really like how the characters are developed and that they stay in characterization. Good job!!!1

Keep on the good writing! Hope to read you soon!

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Re: Good Job! h311ybean July 1 2010, 06:06:57 UTC
Hi! Thanks for your review. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, and appreciate your comment about the characterization :) Staying in-character is important to me.

I'm working on the succeeding chapters now, so stay tuned - the rest is yet to come!

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dawnfarie July 4 2010, 06:49:22 UTC
Ohhhh looks like someone is stirring up Shin-woo's feelings unknowingly!

I wonder what would happen next? o^o

& JEREMY + SU-JIN's "breakup" *gasp*... whyyyyyyyyyyy? I know they didn't had much going in the first place but still...? or did they actually hook up then break up as fast as they did? -left wondering-

Good read and is looking out for the next chapter :D

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h311ybean July 4 2010, 15:16:49 UTC
I think Shin-woo is starting to feel possessive. It's about time - I find it hard to write stories where the girl likes the guy first.

I'm going to leave you wondering about Jeremy and Su-jin... ;)

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dawnfarie July 5 2010, 13:47:33 UTC
I think he does not want to end up losing Ha-neul like how he was so slow in showing his love for Mi-Nyeo! I guess after a while the plot needs some actions from the guy otherwise the writer and the readers might feel the drag in the pace. Of cos the timing must be just about right too!

Noooooooooooooooooooo! You cannot leave me hanging there DX

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h311ybean July 5 2010, 15:35:20 UTC
(Dear Shin-woo, I hope you're reading dawnfarie's comment... stop dawdling! :-p) He will come to that realization for sure, though!

And OK, fine ;) ... as for Jeremy and Su-jin, I think the situation is a bit more complicated than just whether or not they actually have a relationship. They both know their relationship is just pretend, but I think they're getting carried away in their pretending. There was no real relationship that developed outside of what I've written.

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lilivanilla1 July 12 2010, 15:12:18 UTC
Aaaw, not the break-up already!! >.<"

I think Su-jin was begining to have feelings and that she panicked (maybe not but, you know, I like to think this is it^^)

Oh, and I LOVE how Shin-woo is starting to feel so possessing with Ha-neul ♥
*rules for them all along =D*

*runs to read the next chapter xD*

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h311ybean July 12 2010, 16:06:59 UTC
You're right about Su-jin starting to have feelings about Jeremy ;) Of course, she's all mixed up about it because they're only pretending to be boyfriend and girlfriend.

(And honestly, because of this, I'm having problems writing Chapter 14...)

I love Possessive Shin-woo, too. Too bad he's generally a nice guy, because Ha-neul likes a guy who takes charge! :D Maybe someday, he'll become more assertive...

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