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h311ybean

YB Fanfic, Ch. 5

Jun 09, 2010 10:11

Previously:
Chapter 1: Hello I Love You
Chapter 2: My Brave Face
Chapter 3: Temperamental
Chapter 4: Million Dollar Smile

( Pass my heart on, my Heart Messenger )

writing, yb

Comments 7

Ha-neul's outfits for this chapter h311ybean June 9 2010, 14:15:14 UTC

Museum scene with Shin-woo
Music video launch party

Re: Ha-neul's outfits for this chapter dawnfarie June 12 2010, 06:30:23 UTC

Nice combi for both outfits!

lilivanilla1 June 11 2010, 06:44:03 UTC

Aaaah, but there's another chapter!
I haven't seen it! =O
Damn this too long f-page...

Ahah, I loved this chapter! =D
Heyi has just what she deserves!
Ooh, and we're finally having some Jeremy/Su-jin!! (I think they'll be soooo cute together xD)

I really love how you make the ShinWoo-Ha-neul relationship here, too! ♥

h311ybean June 11 2010, 21:43:21 UTC

Hi! Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story :D

(Jeremy and Su-jin are hilarious :-p)

dawnfarie June 12 2010, 06:28:37 UTC

"And I don't need a fairy," she declared, referring of course to Heyi's nickname. "I need a goddess."

WOOOO! What an ending to this wonderful chapter!

It's like watching an actual drama unfolding only this time the male lead is Shin-woo :D

& Jeremy!!! about time he gets someone (Su-jin!!!)

h311ybean June 12 2010, 13:57:42 UTC

:D Thanks for your review! I loved that closing line, too.

And I honestly hadn't planned on Jeremy being paired up with anyone, but he just kept bugging me about it :-p You know what he can be like sometimes, LOL!

dawnfarie June 13 2010, 14:26:47 UTC

You're welcome :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Hehehe I know... I think it would be fun to try pair him up with anybody who catches his fancy, even if you dun plan for it!! Just so him, you know!

I would like to attend all the parties he plan hehe :P