I must admit to being slightly confused with these boys' antics. They are a curious pair...They both seem to be emotionally wanting and flawed. Jared just takes what he wants without consideration or thought and Jensen is so very withdrawn and broken in some cruel way and we find out has undergone therapy! He did show signs of a stutter maybe or perhaps that was just the result of his unused voice, but it only showed when he was stressed.
WOW...the sex was pretty damn hot...The canny way you exaggerated the stolen kisses and highlighted Jared's aggressive manhandling of Jensen and the dog was just mesmerising to read. The whole sexually charged scene made my feel curl with guilty shame....It was deliciously seductive, even coaxing Jensen to speak was sexy...:). I know it may have seemed a little 'rapey' (non.con), eventhough Jensen was given the choice to say NO. Admittedly I think Jensen was in no fit state to say No and I'm not so sure Jared could have resisted if he had....But I got the impression neither boy really wanted to stop the action...:)...and thank God for that!...lol.
There were moments in this chapter where I felt Jensen just needed a great big hug...particularly when he interacted with Max...he just pours all his affection into that dog.
Looks like Jensen is coming down with flu or something. Love sick!Jensen, just perfect icing on this enticing cake.
OMG - this sex scene was so difficult to write and really had to tone it down because, yeah, it was a lot more non-con like the first time round. I'm glad you are enjoying this fic, thank you for reading xxxx
Jared just takes what he wants without consideration or thought and Jensen is so very withdrawn and broken in some cruel way and we find out has undergone therapy! He did show signs of a stutter maybe or perhaps that was just the result of his unused voice, but it only showed when he was stressed.
WOW...the sex was pretty damn hot...The canny way you exaggerated the stolen kisses and highlighted Jared's aggressive manhandling of Jensen and the dog was just mesmerising to read. The whole sexually charged scene made my feel curl with guilty shame....It was deliciously seductive, even coaxing Jensen to speak was sexy...:).
I know it may have seemed a little 'rapey' (non.con), eventhough Jensen was given the choice to say NO. Admittedly I think Jensen was in no fit state to say No and I'm not so sure Jared could have resisted if he had....But I got the impression neither boy really wanted to stop the action...:)...and thank God for that!...lol.
There were moments in this chapter where I felt Jensen just needed a great big hug...particularly when he interacted with Max...he just pours all his affection into that dog.
Looks like Jensen is coming down with flu or something. Love sick!Jensen, just perfect icing on this enticing cake.
Last para is intriguing....
More soon please. Huggles xx
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I'm glad you are enjoying this fic, thank you for reading xxxx
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