hawaii 5-0 fic: just like the barrel going over the falls [steve/danny, r]

[gyzym]

WAIT, WAIT, HERE'S WHAT HAPPENED, IT'S NOT MY FAULT.

Okay, so the other day was illian's birthday, and I said "Oh hey, happy birthday, I will write you an H50 ficlet!" And then, later, hermette and thegrrrl2002 and I had this brief conversation about how Steve and Danny would have like, atrociously failtastic date nights. And I thought to myself, "Oh, self, here is what

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[renne]

This is top of the THINGS I NEED RIGHT NOW list, seriously. Oh gosh, I LOVE THEM SO MUCH. AND THIS, oh failed date night!

[gyzym]

jdfkdfhds WELL IT WAS THIS OR MORE RIDICULOUS LACKADAISY FIC, SO

[renne]

asdfghj i would NOT IN THE SLIGHTEST be against more lackadaisy fic JSYK...

[illian]

Oh god, I'm rolling in this fic. I'm trying to restrain myself from quoting things because it'd be every third line or so.

Your Danny voice is so good!

Dating had never been part of the equation.

That's because your dates involved busting into places and beating people up! Sometimes on bikes!

"The real question," Danny says, "is why you don't know that Sondheim wrote Into the Woods."

Wait, how can they hate Into the Woods?!
. . . man, that may be the gayest thing I've ever said.

[gyzym]

DANNY HAS ~FEELINGS~ ABOUT SONDHEIM, OKAY

(I literally GOT UP OUT OF BED to say that)

[illian]

Danny has feelings about EVERYTHING. especially Steve.

I'm used to you having such clear and distinctive voices in your writing but I'm still startled at how well you captured Danny AND Rachel. Most fic I've read those tend be two of the hardest to get right. Bravo!

Feel free to go back to bed! I'll be here reading (and probably commenting in cackling delight) for a while.

One of the best birthday presents ever. Thank you.

[gyzym]

*high-pitched noises of delight*

I AM SO GLAD YOU ARE ENJOYING THIS BECAUSE IT IS SO MANY DAYS LATE fsjdfhsd and I actually cannot coherently...word...things rn because...bed. TOMORROW, JASON, TOMORROW PROPER REPLIES CAN OCCUR. For now I'm just thrilled you're happy :D :D :D

[saavira]

Duuuude, they're so in love and so horrible at dating! It's so wonderful!!!

Also, I love how H50 snuck up on everyone like the sneaky thing that it is. Like, you decide to watch the first episode 'cause you want to see what the fuss is about and the cast just looks so pretty so you're like why not. And then as you're watching you're laughing at how ridiculous the show is and the next thing you know you're five episodes in. Then you start reading fic and you're like 'fuck, what is this fucking shit, how did I get myself here?' Oh, H50.

[dustfinger223]

This. THIS. Is exactly what I've been thinking! I've had so much trouble wording it to people (Everyone thinks I'm obssessed, which is so not true. Well. Sort of.) and you got it in one!

(Sorry for dropping in to the conversation, btw. ;D)

[mystizan]

_Mesmerised_ by ur Gwaine icon...srsly.

[dustfinger223]

Hahaha. xD I'm glad you like it. P:

[chaoticallyclev]

Oh my gosh, ugh SO MUCH SMILING. SO MUCH SMILING, THAT IS THE ONLY RESPONSE TO THIS FIC. Seriously, my face feels like it's going to pop.

They are such glorious disasters ♥

So, so much love for this, for them, for eveyone involved, just ♥♥♥♥

[gyzym]

Thanks so much, bb ♥

[elise_509]

This is wonderful! They're so goofy in love with each other and totally full of fail on the dating front, it's too cute. :)

[gyzym]

Hee, thanks so much! They are the most full of fail, it's true :D