FELLOW RABID PW FANS, I NEED YOUR HELP :O
OKAY HERE GOES. Mum mentioned once that she could see Wright as being utterly lovesick in Edgeworth's general direction, but that she thought the prosecutor was too damaged to really return it quite as well, even if he wanted to.
I wanted to take the vague idea I'd been given and run with it, but I'm not really sure yet whether or not I like what I wrote. So I'll ask you wonderful people whether I should keep this on my record, or toss it out and disavow ever writing it, because I value your honesty and ability to pick good fic out from the bad. Feedback on whether this worked out all right or was just a pile of garbage would definitely be appreciated.
PS: Before anyone just replies to say 'get a beta reader', I would like to point out that I have one, but that she isn't available at the moment (and won't read blatant narumitsu, anyway).
A Time For Everything
RATING--I'm never good with this. Um. R?
SUMMARY--Phoenix is confronted with an ugly truth about his 'relationship' with Edgeworth, and must come to a decision about whether or not it's worth continuing.
WARNING--They've apparently shagged at some point in this story. (What's new?)
NOTICE: The story posted now is the second, edited version done to fix some glaring errors people pointed out to me.
(Your honor... my client could not possibly have stabbed the man. It was--yes!--a fake cut.)
I wanted to take the vague idea I'd been given and run with it, but I'm not really sure yet whether or not I like what I wrote. So I'll ask you wonderful people whether I should keep this on my record, or toss it out and disavow ever writing it, because I value your honesty and ability to pick good fic out from the bad. Feedback on whether this worked out all right or was just a pile of garbage would definitely be appreciated.
PS: Before anyone just replies to say 'get a beta reader', I would like to point out that I have one, but that she isn't available at the moment (and won't read blatant narumitsu, anyway).
A Time For Everything
RATING--I'm never good with this. Um. R?
SUMMARY--Phoenix is confronted with an ugly truth about his 'relationship' with Edgeworth, and must come to a decision about whether or not it's worth continuing.
WARNING--They've apparently shagged at some point in this story. (What's new?)
NOTICE: The story posted now is the second, edited version done to fix some glaring errors people pointed out to me.
(Your honor... my client could not possibly have stabbed the man. It was--yes!--a fake cut.)