iNolith

[gxaoui]

I have finished writing the iNolith proposal for a BM07 Art grant. You are welcome to take a look at it and make any suggestions for improvement before I submit it. I would appreciate your input and advice, just e-mail me at inolthatgxaouidotus http://gxaoui.us/burningman/opera%20and%20stage/inolith.htm

Comments

[futureboy]

That would go great with my bitmap image I want to do that is viewable from the air and big enough for a satellite to capture it.

[cheezaddict]

I think you should include drawings or diagrams. It's hard to imagine, especially how you will style the controls and screen. You don't mention till the very end that the screen and controls will also be made of rope. This should be explained earlier. Rope is an opaque material. You'll have to explain that the light will be coming from between the ropes and you'll need to describe how tightly you plan to weave it, to give an idea of what kind of "glow" it will have. I have some nit-picky grammatical comments, take them or leave them. "knitted from 1//2” thick" remove second forward slash. "possibly soak the iNolith" remove possibly. Sounds like you don't know what your plan is. You plan to burn it. If the question is what accelerant to use, don't state what accelerant you will be using. If you plan to use biodiesel, state it. A proposal shouldn't say possibly anything. "Post burn clean up will be preformed by the artist by removal of the steel frame (to be recycled) and filling the holes. In addition to the containment and removal of

[gxaoui]

Thank you for the imput I have changed it to reflect your improvements.