I mentioned this on IRC, and you redirected me here, since your plane is landing:
You may have good ideas, but the presentation is basically impossible. Not because the text is poorly written (I don't know of that yet) or organized (I also do not know of that yet), but because it is poorly formatted; in particular, variable line height is very jarring to the human eye, especially when two lines can be separated by a distance almost as large as the paragraph break. This combined with the fact that the page is full width make reading the text very difficult; consider using a different formatting engine?
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You may have good ideas, but the presentation is basically impossible. Not because the text is poorly written (I don't know of that yet) or organized (I also do not know of that yet), but because it is poorly formatted; in particular, variable line height is very jarring to the human eye, especially when two lines can be separated by a distance almost as large as the paragraph break. This combined with the fact that the page is full width make reading the text very difficult; consider using a different formatting engine?
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