Broken Promises (8/?)

Nov 30, 2007 18:28

Title: Broken Promises (8/?)
Author: gwenfrewi72Rating: A or R ( Read more... )

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marilynloren December 1 2007, 10:02:57 UTC
Simon took a swing at him again, didn't he? I wonder how Mal is going to explain this? I don't think saying River started is going to cut it. I hope River was able to pick up on Mal being excited about the baby. She needs some cheering up. It should do the trick. Looking forward to the next part.

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gwenfrewi72 December 1 2007, 18:32:13 UTC
Hmm, it could be Simon or it could be River. Don't know yet. Muse hasn't decided 100% yet and with her, you never know.

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marilynloren December 2 2007, 10:10:55 UTC
Just a question. Is Mal legally married to Saffron if she already had a husband before marrying Mal? If not, does that mean River is officially Mal's wife? I wonder what his reaction will be when he finds out he is married to River.

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gwenfrewi72 December 2 2007, 17:55:19 UTC
All will be reveiled in good time, my dear friend. All in good time. :D

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meepscrawler December 1 2007, 14:44:06 UTC
Heh. Yay, you updated! *squeeeee*
I'm with marilynloren, I think Simon just hit him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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gwenfrewi72 December 1 2007, 18:33:17 UTC
Hey, I had to. The scarier part is I've revived Code of Honor from the depths of oblivion and should be working on that one in the very near future.

As for the next chapter, not entirely sure where it's gonna go but I think you might be right.

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meepscrawler December 1 2007, 18:47:24 UTC
Code of Honor? Huh? This another fanfic you're writing?

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gwenfrewi72 December 1 2007, 18:52:34 UTC
Nope, just a very old one in the bowels of the Mal/River archives. I plan on going back and linking everything, so everyone can get caught up and/or refresh their brains on the story.

Also going to revive Ticket. I have only one or two more chapters left, so I can write that one off as done and start on my EPIC fic.

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anonymous December 1 2007, 20:36:48 UTC
Very happy see this story continue.
So hope it's River giving him the knuckle sandwich.

How serendipitous, I was just reading Code of Honor.
I was going to email and ask you ever finished and I just couldn't
find. So happy to hear that story will continue.

Thanks for writing!

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gwenfrewi72 December 2 2007, 05:09:56 UTC
Yeah, it kind of stalled on the next chapter and then I got distracted by other things, but yes Code of honor will come back, it's only got maybe 7-10 more chapters left to it, so I'm gonna get it completed and wash my hands of it.

As for Broken Promises, plan on working on the next chapter and get it up soon. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Reviewing especially, I don't get paid in cashy money, only in little drops of gold called reviews.

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jaya_solo December 2 2007, 04:07:12 UTC
Lol, did Simon hit him again? Or was it Inara this time? Wait, it's been a while, she's still on the ship in this one, right? If she isn't I'm going to be incredibly embarrassed. Poor Mal, his face is too pretty to keep being punched. I'm excited that you added more, I can wait for the story to continue.

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gwenfrewi72 December 2 2007, 05:12:35 UTC
Hmm, Inara is on the ship still, yes. Whether she'll stay will depend on my muse and whether she can handle it.

Yeah, his face is way to pretty to keep getting punched, but as Mal once said, "They tell you never hit a man with a closed fist, but it is on
occasion hilarious."

Me either. Sometimes I don't even know where I'm going with 'em.

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gwenfrewi72 December 3 2007, 04:06:21 UTC
I saw that you were online and was wondering why you hadn't read the latest chapter yet.

Glad you liked it. More thrilling chapters to come.

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alsunwunderland December 6 2007, 07:02:07 UTC
I love this. I'm happy to Beta anytime. I can't wait to see who punched Mal. My money is on Simon.

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marilynloren December 6 2007, 17:25:36 UTC
Me too. Can't think of anyone else who would want to deck him at the moment.

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