Draft of letter before I send it

[gwendally]

Dear Senator Kerry, Brown, and Representative Olver:

Comments

[barking_iguana]

without hardly anyone noticing it.

Unless you're intentionally using a slangy idiom.

[gwendally]

Thanks, corrected.

[allyphoe]

If you're looking for that kind of correction, "who," not "that," in the first sentence of the second paragraph.

[gwendally]

Thanks.

That, and any other sorts of corrections.

I typically write something and then go away for an hour or so and then reread it before I send it.

[marveen]

I had assumed it was a slangy idiom, but come to think on it....prob'ly better not use casualspeak in a letter to politicos.