So after having written an essay, filled out an application, and obtaining three letters of recommendation for my study abroad application, last week I was sent yet ANOTHER application, this time directed to Waseda University. Among other things I had to do, there was an essay in which I was to "Explain my academic objectives and the academic
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And if you're aiming for a proper essay format...well...I found it kind of lacking here.
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I am an illustrator--a visual storyteller (nice phrase). It is my hope that my work will somehow be able to impact my audience both emotionally and philosophically (at the end of the sentence you sound confident that you can impact your audience-you didn’t say future audience, which means you’re sure you’ve got one now. But using somehow in the middle of the sentence sounds uncertain, so maybe you could exchange somehow for a more concrete word instead.). I was probably only three years of age when I first watched the Hayao Miyazaki film, Tenkuu no Shiro: Laputa, but even to this day I still marvel at the creativity and effort that was put into the production; the film is still one of my favorites. It is through Miyazaki's work, along with the creations of the ( ... )
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