The Lies We Tell (10/?)

Sep 16, 2010 15:36


Title: The Lies We Tell (10/?)
Pairing: gen, Gill, Cal
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: LtM not mine; Henri & Le Fort, mine.
Summary: When Zoe brings a new case and a new partner to the Lightman Group, long-buried truths will be revealed as they work to defend an innocent man, while a side investigation may place one partner in mortal peril.
A/N: No beta ( Read more... )

the lies we tell, lie to me, cal/gill

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aleia_jade September 17 2010, 02:57:10 UTC
she also had an investigation with Torres about a family company that may or may not be slipping into corrupt hands
I totally read that as the investigation slipping into corrupt hands and wondered why she didn't just take it back from Lightman then.

I love all the elements of the show you bring in and develop that might otherwise turn into loose ends. Like Torres. Win for you.

Finally I mostly approve of Henri/Gillian. He appears sincere in his affection, so good for him. Maybe I need to stop judging charming men so harshly.

OH YAY THANKSGIVING DINNER AS A BIG HAPPY OFFICE FAM

BAHAHAHA at Loker and the ice cream, drinking away the awkward, Emily and Gillian.

Dude, watching the Practice makes me so incredibly glad I DIDN'T pursue law. I don't know what Foster sees in it.

I love the little details you work in, like dating Foster to the Gulf war and her covering up her skirt slit.

I really enjoy this fic, just about as much as the actual episodes for the depth and humor and characters. In fact, it might beat out the eps for continuity and character development. Which means it will be a sad day when this ends, finished or not. And if not finished is how it ends up, it's been a fantastic ten chapters that I can't even imagine the amount of work it took to craft.

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gwassh0ppa September 19 2010, 20:46:40 UTC
YAY. REPLY TIME.
HAHA. Well, Cal would make anything corrupt if he could :)
Torres needed something to do. Otherwise, I'll give her crappy lines like, "you should have seen your eyebrow just now." Really show?

You are mostly approving! YAY. Henri is quite pleased. He was hoping you'd say that. No judgement. Just hold your breath regarding Henri.

Happy office fam? Questionable. More like dysfunctional at best :)

The Practice totally went on crack later though. But yeah, me too. It looks awful. Law. Bleh.

I'll keep working on it. Don't fear. Was gauging reader interest at this point. THANKS FOR AWESEOME comments. They are fun and give me something to look forward to :)

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aleia_jade September 20 2010, 04:14:19 UTC
Wait wait wait, I finally join Team Henri, and then you tell me I was right to be cautious? This is not okay. Ohhhh Gillian. ...unless it's a "hold your breath in anticipation" kind of breath-holding. Maybe. I'll just wait and see. And not worry so much. Babygirl can take care of herself. And has, apparently, given that these are FLASHBACKS.

I'm so glad you're forging ahead. Happytiems will be had.

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