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Challenge #4: Good Friends Will Help You Move A Body

Jan 11, 2004 05:10

Title: Good Friends Will Help You Move A Body
Challenge Word: "digging"
Author: inq
Pairing: none/ 3+2 non-sexual friendship
Rating: G
Warnings: slightly… scary? And of course, not beta'd... oh, and I exceeded the word count a bit... like 147 words? - sorry, I tried to keep it short! ^_^;;;

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ponderosa121 January 11 2004, 04:53:18 UTC
Grah. Wish you could edit comments instead of having to resubmit them... That should've been... THIS much. But yeah, blahblah and all that. *snogs you and runs off*

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*________* iniq January 11 2004, 05:16:47 UTC
*dies, laughing tears*

OMG...
... )

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yankeerose69 January 11 2004, 12:07:06 UTC
How silly, I love it!

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yankeerose69 January 11 2004, 12:08:09 UTC
Too funny. Now this I would like to see animated since the whole time I could pic it as being turned into a movie. Great piece either way. Those two work pretty good as a team ^_~

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iniq January 11 2004, 16:22:36 UTC
Thank you - glad you enjoyed it! *^___^*

... and yes, I think so too. They do work well together. I enjoy writing Trowa-Duo friendship scenes, making them both silly... *snerk*

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ikomiko January 11 2004, 12:32:04 UTC
*laughs* God, that and the pic are both crazy. *giggles* And I couldn't exactly be sure what was going on. But cool anyway!! :D Very nice, 'n' well written.

~ikomiko

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iniq January 11 2004, 16:30:50 UTC
^__^
I read some of the other fics, and they all seemed so serious and angsty... >_>; my 'angsty' fics always sound weirdly pseudo-philosophical, and tend to make no sense - so I decided to go for the 'crazy' idea. ^_~
glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment! ^__^

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spacebabe January 11 2004, 19:43:02 UTC
LOL, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this. I started out with curiousity which turned into horror and then faded into chuckling. Love what you did with it, strange humor is my fav kind. And I would be one of those 'all serious and angsty' writers. Dammit, I wish I could write things like this. *grins* There are just so many hilarious lines in here:

"It's not really his fault that you mowed him down. On a wide, straight street. In broad daylight."

Trowa huffed. "Rudolph. You just had to go and give him a name, didn't you?"

LMAO, priceless, and for some odd and scary reason I can totally see this entire scene play out in my head.

LOL, I almost chocked on my coffee here, and I pray Trowa doesn't mean that he's buried Q this way *big grin*

"To Rudolph. A reindeer with a short, but surely fulfilled life… before it crossed ways with an ex-Gundam pilot who still thinks that the navigator system screen resembles a cockpit monitor."

Wonderful. Thanks for the story :)

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spacebabe January 11 2004, 19:44:45 UTC
Um, guess I screwed up with the tagging on the second part I wanted to quote, which was this:

Duo stared down, frowning at the perfect fit. "You have experience with this sort of situation?"

"Quatre."

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iniq January 11 2004, 20:54:52 UTC
^____^ glad you liked it! *loves feedback and happy readers*

I have no idea why, but whenever I put Trowa and Duo in a scene together, they start dancing together and something like this comes out. They're my comedy relief, I guess. ^_^
it makes me very happy to see that people can actually 'see' the scene!

LOL, I almost chocked on my coffee here, and I pray Trowa doesn't mean that he's buried Q this way *big grin*

O.O Oh my...
XD - that's one option I didn't consider... but you're right... viewed in a certain light, it does look like he's buried Quatre. *cracks up*
^___^
nah... just for the record. *g* He did not bury Quatre.

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zalia January 11 2004, 22:34:47 UTC
LOL!!

Heh. I love the way it's all dark and atmospheric and tense and then we find out it's a reindeer! So many funny lines!!

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iniq January 11 2004, 23:42:05 UTC
*^__^* sankyuu! glad you enjoyed the funny lines! ^__~
it's always a fight to write something 'funny' - because often enough the author is the only one who thinks it's funny. ^_^; I'm glad it worked.

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