Fic: The One Where Nick Needs to Stop Worrying and Pleasure His Boyfriend

Feb 06, 2012 20:56

Title: The One Where Nick Needs to Stop Worrying and Pleasure His Boyfriend
Fandom: Grimm
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Nick/Monroe
Summary: Fill for this prompt. Dialogue fic. Monroe coaches Nick through their first time.
Word Count: 763
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my own words.

It’s okay, Nick. You’ll do fine.” )

grimm, fic, pairing: nick/monroe

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rabidchild February 7 2012, 22:17:51 UTC
OK, I'MA LEAVE A COMMENT, BECAUSE GOOD FICS NEED COMMENTS

Ahem. Even though I commented on this on the meme, I had to skip on over and RAVE SOME MORE. I love this too much - Nick is so adorable and unsure, and MOnroe so sweetly patient. GUH - I wants this in canon!

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guanin February 7 2012, 23:17:04 UTC
Thank you so much! I do love it when Monroe has to guide Nick during sex. He fits the innocent newbie role so well. I need this in canon, too! So much! Alas, it's not gonna happen. *cries*

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nikko_tegonyan February 8 2012, 07:58:17 UTC
sjkfadk aww yeah. that was great! I don't normally comment on fics (which is why there's not much evidence of me on this comm) but this fic =w=bb you need more than one comment.

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guanin February 8 2012, 18:26:25 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it! Thanks for commenting!

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satancat February 11 2012, 15:11:59 UTC
teehee!
this is super duper giggle worthy.

I like your dialogue-only style--normally I don't really dig it because it sounds pretentious (when it's a really tense scene or something) but with a fun premise and comedic air, this totally works :DDD

enjoyed. *thumbs up*

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guanin February 14 2012, 16:59:20 UTC
Thank you very much! I think this is only the second dialogue fic I've written. It is a tricky stile to pull off without sounding weird, and then this is smut on top of everything, so I'm really happy that it came out alright.

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laurapetri August 8 2012, 02:06:18 UTC
hot

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