Comments | gryfndor_godess: SPN fic: Morning Routine

gryfndor_godess

SPN fic: Morning Routine

Oct 14, 2012 15:44

Title: Morning Routine
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Far-off future Dean/Bela + Sam domestic fluff. 1,200 words.
A/N: Takes place in a post-canon future in which Bela was rescued from Hell and she and Dean are a couple. The boys still hunt, and she still makes Ocean look like an amateur, but when they have downtime they regroup at her house.

( Read more... )

dean/bela, bela talbot, fanfic, dean winchester, supernatural, sam winchester

Comments 20

snickfic October 14 2012, 20:10:46 UTC

OH YOU. I saw your note on Tumblr yesterday, and I wanted to comment, "So WHERE IS IT, you TEASE?!" Except I wasn't sure what the proper way was to do that on Tumblr.

The show never really caught my interest in the direction of Dean/Bela, so I read this pretty much because it was you, and it was you writing SPN fic, and obviously that is a thing that needs to be encouraged.

Except, you totally sold me on them! On Bela, teasing Dean and prodding him and giving him nice views of her putting on her leggings. I always had trouble imagining any affection growing up between these two, and even here it's not explicitly stated, but it's obviously there.

And then you have some wonderful lines. Some really wonderful lines. Like:

“No.” She squeezed his thigh. “Your brother’s very honorable. He keeps turning me down.”

LOLOL. There was OUT LOUD, IN MY LIVING ROOM snorfling at that one.

“You know what they say: those who sweat together shower together.”

And that is a woman who knows how to get what she wants.

Dean snorted. “Well, I don’ ( ... )

gryfndor_godess October 15 2012, 00:22:34 UTC

Adlsdjflsdjf, thank you so much for the lovely, lovely comment!! I was worried no one would want to read Dean/Bela, but I thought maybe you'd try it anyway, for friendship's sake, and then you say I sold you on them, and THAT IS THE NICEST THING YOU COULD HAVE SAID. \O/

LOLOL. There was OUT LOUD, IN MY LIVING ROOM snorfling at that one.

:D :D :D Thank you for listing the lines you liked!

obviously that is a thing that needs to be encouraged.

There is SO MUCH fic I want to write (okay, well, mostly it's one Dean/Bela epic, but also a few Bela one-shots, and there's this Ruby/Sam AU one-shot I'm toying with, but the problem is, I need to have watched the rest of the show before I could write, like, 90% of my plot bunnies. *headdesk*).

I'm SO happy you liked it! ♥

snickfic October 15 2012, 00:24:21 UTC

the problem is, I need to have watched the rest of the show before I could write, like, 90% of my plot bunnies.

BUT WE WILL SOON FIX THIS PROBLEM.

gryfndor_godess October 15 2012, 00:37:22 UTC

YES WE WILL, AND IT WILL BE GLORIOUS.

Dean/Bela instarec livejournal October 14 2012, 20:15:37 UTC

User snickfic referenced to your post from Dean/Bela instarec saying: [...] If Dean/Bela interests you in the slightest, then hie thee over to readMorning Routine [...]

elliemurasaki October 14 2012, 20:56:11 UTC

Heeheehee

gryfndor_godess October 15 2012, 00:03:00 UTC

Thanks for reading!

brutti_ma_buoni October 14 2012, 22:04:40 UTC

Hey, you did it! And I like your Bela, enough to see why the Winchesters would still be around her after Stuff Happens, whatever that is.

gryfndor_godess October 15 2012, 00:05:10 UTC

I did! :D Yay, I'm so glad you liked her. Thanks for reading!

kwritten October 14 2012, 23:14:22 UTC

THIS IS THE LOVELIEST OF ALL THE LOVELY THINGS!!!!

I love Bela like pancakes and am still mourning her loss, thank you so much for the delightful domesticity!

gryfndor_godess October 15 2012, 00:03:47 UTC

Thank you!! :D I'm so happy you liked it!

am still mourning her loss

~forever mourning, *sob*

kwritten October 15 2012, 00:18:11 UTC

~forever mourning, *sob*

Ain't it the truth?