Narnian Love Story

Aug 18, 2007 23:48

I know, it's astonishing. Something from me that's not Peter/Claire!

Title: Narnian Love Story
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 50 sentences about Edmund and Lucy. Done for 1sentence, using the Gamma chart.
A/N: I did this for two reasons! The first is because An Unexpected Love (a Ron/Luna piece done in the same style) was so well ( Read more... )

fandom: chronicles of narnia, edmund/lucy, rating: pg-13, universe: canon

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xsay_goodnight August 19 2007, 10:18:03 UTC
This was beautiful! It makes me want to write one (: Lol

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gryff_of_grace August 19 2007, 19:24:08 UTC
Thanks, hon! I'm glad you liked it, since you're been wanting some Narnia fic. :D And you should definitely write one! There's not enough Ed/Lu love out there. <333

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boycottbananas August 19 2007, 16:42:56 UTC
Okay, so I basically loved #9, 27, 31, 32 [which I read the original fic of, and yeah, I cried] and pretty much everything else. *-*

It makes me happy that I can easily go back into my old fandoms even after a while of not being in them. ^^;;

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gryff_of_grace August 19 2007, 19:25:45 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! :D And, yeah, that fic is a tearjerker. I remember I was a mess while writing it.

I've been out of the Narnia fandom for awhile, and I've decided it's high time for me to get back in. :)

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katsumi_chan August 19 2007, 16:59:08 UTC
Oh, wow. Edmund/Lucy. I had almost forgotten how absolutely beaButiful they are! Plus I love the 1sentence format, it captures everything I love about fanfiction (the quiet, picturesque moments and feelings between characters) without even needing plot to tie it all together. This. Was. Superb.

The last line, especially, got to me. When they are born again, they take their first breath together, and they're both smiling. That's exquisite. Because of course so much has happened to them, good and bad, but in the end they have Narnia and they have each other and they are together, which makes it beautiful.

I love that you didn't go chronologically, but skipped around between pre-Narnia and post-Narnia and mid-Narnia in such a way that really captures the whole of their relationship. I think putting a very early one, Lucy's birth, so close to the end was especially effective. Your portrayal of their relationship is dead-on and absolutely breathtaking. Thank you so much for writing them!! :)

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gryff_of_grace August 20 2007, 01:49:40 UTC
Hey, hon! *huggles*

I definitely had to write Ed/Lu again. I was thinking of Peter/Susan, but these two called me. :) I'm so so glad you liked it, 'cause I know how much you love them. :D

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scullymulder123 August 19 2007, 21:37:20 UTC
Brilliant job. You most certainly captured the Edmund/Lucy dynamic, and yay you for throwing a Peter/Susan reference, too, in the Gravity one. XD (Oh, do you think you could f-lock your post on edmund_lucy? Thanks!) Once again, this was fantastic.

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gryff_of_grace August 20 2007, 01:51:09 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

And yeah, definitely had to throw Peter/Susan in there. :)

I will f-lock my post, I forgot! Doh.

Btw, do you ship Peter/Claire?

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scullymulder123 August 20 2007, 21:58:51 UTC
yeah, I do. :D

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gryff_of_grace August 20 2007, 23:34:10 UTC
I thought so! :)

And the post @ edmund_lucy is officially locked. ;)

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coffeedrops August 20 2007, 04:23:27 UTC
I LOVED THEM! (AND CONSIDER I DON'T LIKE QUITE MUCH THIS PAIRING; I'M MORE FOND OF LUCY/TUMNUS)

#46 - GRAVITY.
LITTLE SUSAN/PETER HINT? HOPE SO :D

PS: AND OH, HOW MUCH IVE MISSED SOME GOOD NARNIA FIC! THANKS FOR THIS ^^

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gryff_of_grace August 20 2007, 23:37:41 UTC
I'm glad you liked it, hon, even if you prefer Tumus/Lucy! :)

That was a definite Peter/Susan hint. You know how I ♥ them. :D

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