my first fanfiction
Hi yaw this is my first fanfic so please be supportive.any way if you have any questions,comments,or ideas just post or e-mail please&thankyou=).and I cant tell the plot because it is all a surprise=).
CHARACTERS: Hiroki, Yamato, Naoto, Yoh, Katchan,and Ryo a.k.a orange range.Trisha,and Jolunda.aiight now lets get started=)
Contestperson:"Hello may I please speak with Jolunda Dandrige"?
Jolunda:"This is she" she said while rolling her eyes thinking it was another gotdamn bill collector.
C/P:"Hi this is Yoku Hishara from JM 2.79 radio calling to tell you Jolunda
Dandrige that you've just won the "Oneiga Seniorita", Orange Range contest. Where you and one special friend, get to go on a first class trip
with back stage passes.To Okanowa,Japan to kick it with the orange range crew."
Jolunda:"OMG I WON"!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS I WON!" she said while screaming at the top of her lungs. Trisha ran from the kitchen while in the middle of cooking pancakes.
Trisha:"Jolunda what is wrong with you?" she said in a panicking kind of way.
Jolunda:"o.k. o.k." she said while fanning her self trying to calm down.
Jolunda:"We just won a trip to go see Orange Range live"!
Trisha:"What are you serious"? she said while blinking her eyes in amazment.Then both girls started jumping and screaming,
Jolunda:"O.K. stop" she said out of breath
Jolunda:"Hello,Yushi"?
C/P:"I was hoping you would come back,but any way I've got a time limit for you,Jolunda you and your friend must be at the air port by 5:30 p.m.
o.k."?
Jolunda:"Yes, thank you very much"
C/P:"Awww you're welcome have fun"
Jolunda:"You best believe I will"
C/P:"O.K. bye"
Jolunda:"bye"
Trisha:"O.K. what she say"?
Jolunda:"Yoku told me that we had a time limit to get to the air port,we have until 5:30 p.m."
Trisha:"Lets start packing"!she said in excitment.
Then both girls ran up stairs screaming,Trisha and Jolunda took at least
30 minutes each to pack their clothes.Soon as they were done they threw their bags down the steps,then ran.Then all of a sudden BOOM,ZLOOP,BAM goes Jolunda flying down the steps,then Trisha burst out laghing.
Jolunda:"Hey that ain't funny"! she yelled to Trisha
Trisha:"Oh YES IT IS"she said while still laghing. After that little episode Jolunda brushed her self off and both girls put their shoes on took their luggage out to the car,put it in then drove off to the air port.
well thats all I'm doing tonight hoped you liked it=)
bye
CHARACTERS: Hiroki, Yamato, Naoto, Yoh, Katchan,and Ryo a.k.a orange range.Trisha,and Jolunda.aiight now lets get started=)
Contestperson:"Hello may I please speak with Jolunda Dandrige"?
Jolunda:"This is she" she said while rolling her eyes thinking it was another gotdamn bill collector.
C/P:"Hi this is Yoku Hishara from JM 2.79 radio calling to tell you Jolunda
Dandrige that you've just won the "Oneiga Seniorita", Orange Range contest. Where you and one special friend, get to go on a first class trip
with back stage passes.To Okanowa,Japan to kick it with the orange range crew."
Jolunda:"OMG I WON"!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS I WON!" she said while screaming at the top of her lungs. Trisha ran from the kitchen while in the middle of cooking pancakes.
Trisha:"Jolunda what is wrong with you?" she said in a panicking kind of way.
Jolunda:"o.k. o.k." she said while fanning her self trying to calm down.
Jolunda:"We just won a trip to go see Orange Range live"!
Trisha:"What are you serious"? she said while blinking her eyes in amazment.Then both girls started jumping and screaming,
Jolunda:"O.K. stop" she said out of breath
Jolunda:"Hello,Yushi"?
C/P:"I was hoping you would come back,but any way I've got a time limit for you,Jolunda you and your friend must be at the air port by 5:30 p.m.
o.k."?
Jolunda:"Yes, thank you very much"
C/P:"Awww you're welcome have fun"
Jolunda:"You best believe I will"
C/P:"O.K. bye"
Jolunda:"bye"
Trisha:"O.K. what she say"?
Jolunda:"Yoku told me that we had a time limit to get to the air port,we have until 5:30 p.m."
Trisha:"Lets start packing"!she said in excitment.
Then both girls ran up stairs screaming,Trisha and Jolunda took at least
30 minutes each to pack their clothes.Soon as they were done they threw their bags down the steps,then ran.Then all of a sudden BOOM,ZLOOP,BAM goes Jolunda flying down the steps,then Trisha burst out laghing.
Jolunda:"Hey that ain't funny"! she yelled to Trisha
Trisha:"Oh YES IT IS"she said while still laghing. After that little episode Jolunda brushed her self off and both girls put their shoes on took their luggage out to the car,put it in then drove off to the air port.
well thats all I'm doing tonight hoped you liked it=)
bye