You'd be surprised at how clean and intricate you can get with a ball point pen, a motor from a CD player, and a guitar string.Heh, I get a writing credit for that line
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Yeah right, it was YOUR line, abotu the cobweb design. Nice detail, thank you.
It's fab hot and you enjoyed the POV - so my goal is achieved and Im proud.
Yours are interesting notes (and I was expecting some). With my previous ZILCH knowledge of inking art, I think I pulled it off ok.
Maybe it's not exactly clear, but they are smoking in the living area on the 2nd floor (same where is the kitchen), but the tatts studio is on the first. So no sterility compromised.
Many people have that pleasure/pain effect when getting tattooed. I'd like to see this explored...and especially if Dean were getting the tattoo on his back near his spine. If honestly, I had a couple of ideas how to continue this one, explorign the *bad* Dean's past and Alex's *darker* past and how Sam tries to win Dean over who first hooks up with Alex, but gradually warms up to Sam...but it's complicated and needs lots of creative efforts.. but...maybe...when I feel inspired enough.
THANKS you for the detailed fb! You must have...LOTS of tatts.
I do have lots of tats, LOL. If I count the separate number of times I've been under the tattoo gun, it would be...hmmm...8 total. I also have about $2500 worth of work, easy.
Indeed, if I put focus on all THREE characters, then it would be 40 pages. LOL. And porn would losse itself among the characterisation. :)
So in short, if it worked for you GREAT!!! Because for me, it did, and I loved writing this type of everybody. And yup, Sam is the best of the three (though I had a little backstory in my mind, and Dean's just...fucked up, you know, all that *childhood trauma* etc).
In fact I understand you had to focus on the porn, because well, PWP! Maybe (cause I noticed Sib had something to object about characterization) it can feel like it needs character development because you chose to have the characters so out of canon, so there were not the usual cliches (in a good way) that go with usual S&D. That would be the only reason, but you chose to make the OOC, and Sam was obviosly well fleshed out because he's the POV, but I could work well with Dean being mysterious, because it's what made him alluring. So yeah, it worked!
PA: MISSSYOU! But I'm right here! :))) and just to make you participate in the madness that is me, I just tried to make Fede watch last SPN ep. If she does I'm curious to see what she thinks of it ;) She's all serious business, cause thesis is almost done, i hope I'm not distracting her form work ;)
I will post more Spawn soon, and I hope if not that part, then my Interlude that deals with past wincest will keep you satisfied on backstory and characterisation. :)
Oh yeah, we need some Fede here. And her *academic* defragmentation of our madness. ;)
And i need soem new distraction from whatever is going on about Jared and the rest in the fandom. You can read about how I feel in the comments to Laisy to my today's post (we started in English, but then I grew bitter and continued in Russian).
Jesus freaking christ on wheels!!! *Gah* This was everything and even more than I hoped it to be, just amazingly hot and mind blowingly kinky, thank YOU! I love your brain!:P *grins and fans self
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Hey Ania!!! You just made my evening with your fb. You always say just what I wanted to hear, and get those...little details/nuances I drop throughout the fic I hope readers appreciates. You ARE that reader.
Yeah, I told you i cant think how Sam and Alex can have full sex, but why can't Sam have an unrequited crush? And I bet he'd appreciate, when he gets older, that Alex cares about him and doesn't fuck him up.
And Dean... he's like that because apparently he's had soem issues... (you noted that detail how his mood changes when Sam mentions *beloved son*?) That's the ONLY clue to Dean's past I leave...
I do have ideas *maybe* I will one day pick this one up...but can't promise anything right now. THANK YOU!!!!!! :)
PS: I cancel my request for Sam/Ruby vid in the light of the latest *events* in the fandom, the sudden *gf* of Jared's etc. I just...don't think it's a good idea in ANY way.
PS2: I posted some nice pics of me today. Check them out.
"Yeah, I told you i cant think how Sam and Alex can have full sex, but why can't Sam have an unrequited crush? And I bet he'd appreciate, when he gets older, that Alex cares about him and doesn't fuck him up
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So the rumor of the girl playing Ruby and Jared are true then? Heh, well that would explain the hot sex scenes at least. Hmmm. I'd not like to engage in a dispute here, but imo when they filmed that scene (Aug? Sept?), Gen was FAR from being Jared's gf. He was only with Jensen then adn lookign very happy. IMO this whole stuff is more... a media thing, a promo... just like back in spring 2007 when all of a sudden it was about the gfs and engagements and etc. and no no no, we don't need Ruby as a friggin' love interest! We've lived 3 seasons for w/o it, don't friggin ruin the show!!!
No, I just dont think that what I wanted to be said in that vid/song is what I believe now... if this makes sense. Or maybe...you can wait till the season end and see what path S/R develops.
I told you I'd finish. Damn, why didn't I do it sooner? That was so hot. What would Jensen and Nic think? LOL
And that "/end?" needs to be removed and you need to write a sequel. LOL The more Dean and Alex and tattoos, the better! Maybe even add a Mulder or someone else. :D *squee* I'm all giddy now. lmao
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It's fab hot and you enjoyed the POV - so my goal is achieved and Im proud.
Yours are interesting notes (and I was expecting some). With my previous ZILCH knowledge of inking art, I think I pulled it off ok.
Maybe it's not exactly clear, but they are smoking in the living area on the 2nd floor (same where is the kitchen), but the tatts studio is on the first. So no sterility compromised.
Many people have that pleasure/pain effect when getting tattooed. I'd like to see this explored...and especially if Dean were getting the tattoo on his back near his spine. If honestly, I had a couple of ideas how to continue this one, explorign the *bad* Dean's past and Alex's *darker* past and how Sam tries to win Dean over who first hooks up with Alex, but gradually warms up to Sam...but it's complicated and needs lots of creative efforts.. but...maybe...when I feel inspired enough.
THANKS you for the detailed fb! You must have...LOTS of tatts.
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Indeed, if I put focus on all THREE characters, then it would be 40 pages. LOL. And porn would losse itself among the characterisation. :)
So in short, if it worked for you GREAT!!! Because for me, it did, and I loved writing this type of everybody. And yup, Sam is the best of the three (though I had a little backstory in my mind, and Dean's just...fucked up, you know, all that *childhood trauma* etc).
PA: MISSSYOU!
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So yeah, it worked!
PA: MISSSYOU!
But I'm right here! :))) and just to make you participate in the madness that is me, I just tried to make Fede watch last SPN ep. If she does I'm curious to see what she thinks of it ;) She's all serious business, cause thesis is almost done, i hope I'm not distracting her form work ;)
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Oh yeah, we need some Fede here. And her *academic* defragmentation of our madness. ;)
And i need soem new distraction from whatever is going on about Jared and the rest in the fandom. You can read about how I feel in the comments to Laisy to my today's post (we started in English, but then I grew bitter and continued in Russian).
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Yeah, I told you i cant think how Sam and Alex can have full sex, but why can't Sam have an unrequited crush? And I bet he'd appreciate, when he gets older, that Alex cares about him and doesn't fuck him up.
And Dean... he's like that because apparently he's had soem issues... (you noted that detail how his mood changes when Sam mentions *beloved son*?) That's the ONLY clue to Dean's past I leave...
I do have ideas *maybe* I will one day pick this one up...but can't promise anything right now. THANK YOU!!!!!! :)
PS: I cancel my request for Sam/Ruby vid in the light of the latest *events* in the fandom, the sudden *gf* of Jared's etc. I just...don't think it's a good idea in ANY way.
PS2: I posted some nice pics of me today. Check them out.
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So the rumor of the girl playing Ruby and Jared are true then? Heh, well that would explain the hot sex scenes at least. Hmmm. I'd not like to engage in a dispute here, but imo when they filmed that scene (Aug? Sept?), Gen was FAR from being Jared's gf. He was only with Jensen then adn lookign very happy. IMO this whole stuff is more... a media thing, a promo... just like back in spring 2007 when all of a sudden it was about the gfs and engagements and etc. and no no no, we don't need Ruby as a friggin' love interest! We've lived 3 seasons for w/o it, don't friggin ruin the show!!!
No, I just dont think that what I wanted to be said in that vid/song is what I believe now... if this makes sense. Or maybe...you can wait till the season end and see what path S/R develops.
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And I'm glad I did, too! :D
I have to say I wasn't sure I'm buying yours Sam at first, but I quickly got used thi this changed version of him.
And Alex was just very, very, *very* hot.
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IMO Sam...he grows up and catches up with Deand and Alex...and he wants to have his share of Dean's ass....
Well, in fact if you liked it....LOVE.
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And that "/end?" needs to be removed and you need to write a sequel. LOL The more Dean and Alex and tattoos, the better! Maybe even add a Mulder or someone else. :D *squee* I'm all giddy now. lmao
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Im glad you enjoyed it. Who knows...maybe one day I will write more. THANK YOU.
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