pirosn!sex ficlet 2

Aug 21, 2008 22:08

This is an equally short ficlet-sequel to my prison!sex S&D drabble Black and Blue.

How Dean would deal with an aftermath?

Title: Blank
Rating: R
Pairings: no sex in this ficlet (please, don't run away yet!)
Warnings: implied non-con
Wordcount: 325
beta: inlaterdays. /smishes/
Notes: if you read Black and Blue before, this will make more sense.

Dean walks out of the infirmary after three days... )

supernatural, fic

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warpedsexuality August 22 2008, 09:01:21 UTC
Again, too realistic for my taste. As in, too traumatic for my taste. But there are some nice details, like Sam being unaware of the extent of the attack, which I personally only realised in the end, same time as I realised *why* he is ignorant. How it's possible to keep something like that under wraps in a prison I don't know, but I can see how you would want to shave away any further explanation for this short a fic. And technically, the rape scenario is done well because it's poignant. Hence the first sentences of this fb :)

In the last lines the development becomes so glimpsed-in-fragments that the piece is most easily identifiable as a ficlet - which it is, so... duh, but it's not my favourite form. I usually like my fiction more wordy than the ficlet allows, and I'm not a big fan of the callous tone that this very short form tends to assist.

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griva_x August 22 2008, 09:08:50 UTC
Heh heh. All my f-list prefers 10 page fics, I KNOW.
But I don't have an intent ever to write such a long prison fic w/o skating into a million of cliches.

IMHO that's the whole POINT of such drabbles, to shock reader into awareness with the discovery at the end, drop quick flashbacks, glances to make reader realize what had happened. :) So yeah, if you *got* the idea what had happened, than I reached my point. /beams/

So, it was a nice excercise. I do plan to write maybe more (and using more words, LOL) in this verse, but later.

Btw, have you seen Folsom Prison Blues ep?

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warpedsexuality August 22 2008, 09:47:45 UTC
Yes, I saw the ep once upon a time. I haven't seen it lately so it's probably among the files I couldn't access on Lu's dvd's. There were a few eps I couldn't see. As far as I recall the action is pretty blah, but there is some nice manhandling of Dean. And like I told Lu, I've always been a sucker for prison garbs, so that was... entertaining :P

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griva_x August 22 2008, 11:38:26 UTC
Ha. It's not a universal secret that the plots are mostly *always* blah on SPN and we watch either for some action or (mostly) for the manhandling or angsty moments. I must admit I don't knowwhat I prefer, if the bros manhandle each other or somebody else manhandles them. :)

Btw, about manhandling manips: umm...have maybe one or two of them (you've seen them). I can of course go through my manip collection and uload couple more that look *real* and cute (omg, I just admitted the fact that I DO look at the cute fluffy stuff too).

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warpedsexuality August 22 2008, 14:11:01 UTC
True, SPN is mostly good for the manhandling, and you know, during S3 I cannot recall a single ep that does not have one or both brothers in restraints at some point. So either the writers have an item on their agenda called "Mandatory manhandling" or I just forget any episode that doesn't include that particular entertainment. As for preferences, I think it's a special treat when the brothers manhandle each other.

omg, I just admitted the fact that I DO look at the cute fluffy stuff too
I'm going to make an admission to something embarrassing, too, so that we can speak freely to each other ;P
I like Harry/Draco slash in the Harry Potter fandom. There. Adversary pairings are just that good for me that I actually am turned on by - what? - sixteen-year-olds? That's barely legal, even in Denmark, not to mention absolutely lame, so I don't think any of my f-listies have to be ashamed of their kinks in my presence.

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griva_x August 22 2008, 15:13:20 UTC
Harry/Draco????????????????????????
Now, I'm shocked. No amount of money will make me turn to that pairing. Because I don't like the looks of either.

But yeah...I guess I have nothing like that to hide from my f-list. ;)

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warpedsexuality August 22 2008, 15:37:45 UTC
Haha, ouw *hides face in embarrassment* That hurt. My pride, anyway. I know, I know. Harry/Draco. I don't really have anything to say in defense of that. It doesn't get much worse.

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crap. griva_x August 22 2008, 15:40:27 UTC
I wanted to post those manips to Club, because I don't give any credit and stuff.

So Im reposting them, ok?

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thandie August 22 2008, 16:20:13 UTC
Ahah, I was with you Fede. I had my HD period, embarassing as it was and everything...I found such CREEPY fantastic fics I've not even found on SPN.
But the fics I read were usually dealing with older Harry and Draco, often during the hypothetical war (that i guess didn't happen anyway?).
And uhm, you know already, but I wanted to let Olga know too *lol* So, I guess we all have more fandoms that we dont know about? Even small and for a brief period of time?
I think I'll post this question on my lj or at PC, I0m curious about this...I have such pearls on my past ^^'

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warpedsexuality August 22 2008, 18:03:25 UTC
Oh, bless you! Again you save my skin.

Yeah, most of the fics I read are supposed to take place after Hogwarts, so that makes it a little less... horrific. But still. Even typing the name Hogwarts makes my ears burn *LOL* I'm not sure if the war happened or not in canon, btw. I still haven't read the last three books.

I just.. I dunno. Enemy pairings, I can't resist them. I love the fact that the Malfoy brat is in fact so very *loathsome*.

Talk about pearls in one's past! There are pearls in my past AND in my present, lol.

But now for REAL pearls: WOW, Olga just showed me the manip you did of Dean and Sam. It's scorching!! WTF?! I didn't know you made manips, or that you even dealt in still images. What a lame-oh I am, I need to pay closer attention.

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griva_x August 22 2008, 18:12:25 UTC
Girls, go discuss H/D someplace else. I mean, I barely suffered through first three movies...then I could not STAND it any more.

Oh, btw, I TRIED TO READ SOME LOTR SLASH! I had enough patience for two and a half fics. It was Legolas/Aragorn, I must tell you, or else you'd start gloating over hairy midgets (=hobbits) fetish!

AND I tried to read soem Scully/OFC. But hey...two women having sex...where is the angst in it? Where is the turn on if they throw each other at walls?

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thandie August 22 2008, 19:32:12 UTC
Yes I like that pairing for the same reasons...and I preferred those ones where they keep being enemies, and hating each oter obviously. And there are examples of great writers I read that manage to justice to this kind of dynamic.
Now I'll shut it 'cause Olga doesn't want us to talk about HD *zips mouth* I'll see to make a post about this later :)

Oh you had not seen the manip? Really? It's a little old already I guess, and the only SPN 'art' I've made...I had so much fun with that one *lol*

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griva_x August 22 2008, 19:40:23 UTC
You can TALK ALL YOU WANT about Mulder&KKrycek as adversaries here, and hate to love you dynamics (or love to hate you), but H/D? It's not even funny!

And then there was also Harry's best buddy, that ugly redhead guy. Ok, maybe if I was 12 yrs old when I watched the films, I'd have kept my gloatign at bay. But...dunno....I just don't see *any* spark of hot action among those!

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griva_x August 22 2008, 18:07:46 UTC
I'll won't give you much food for gloating. I have no secret crushes in the past. My M/K passion was so overwhelming, I had no eyes for anything else. I was always scornful of Krycek/Skinner, but i DID enjoy a few Mulder/Skinner fics, because in them (and totally OOC) Mulder was alwasy a subby bitch!

I tried to read Once A Thief slash, but I can't stand the looks of Vic's partner. A few Boondock Saints ficlets were cool, but they had a completely different chemistry than Wincest...so well...boring, eh? I MUST say that with Wincest, all the demon- and daddy-cest fics I' m catching up now, eh?

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thandie August 22 2008, 19:26:13 UTC
LOL, you told me about OaT...I hate that guy too, and even more because he was upposed to be the sexy one in there. Well, obviously! If they dress Vic as a blind old man I can't see how he's going to attract eyes ^^'

I have mostly past ships from anime...yes, that was my introduction to yaoi. Then after that I manages to get into slash. It was like junior high school *lol*

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