prison!sex ficlet - SPN

[griva_x]

Note: I wanted to make an entry for for the Porn Battle VI, with prompts moody boots, black out, risky, black and blue, but this did not quite qualify as full-fledged yummy porn. But it turned out pretty good to go to waste.

Title: Black and Blue
Rating: R
Pairings: Dean/Sam, Dean/OMC
Warnings: implied non-con
Wordcount: 200
Unbeta'd

Comments

[thandie]

Oh look at this! You didn't tell me you had this in your mind. I guess it was the heat of the moment :)
This is, uhm, pretty hard, and hurt!Dean...why do I like him so?
So I guess he ended up tangled in with the officers? Well, but really...guy with that face, I'm surprised they didn't hint at this topic in ANY way at all during that episode. It almost writes itself.
And I always complained about the lack of prison fics after that ep, so THANK YOU.
And, uhm, is there hope that your special muse makes you write more on this particulal verse? ;)

[griva_x]

Heh heh, it DID almost write itself, I only had to choose the right prompts. I myself complained about the lack of PrisonSex fics. I've read a couple of short snippets that were very good, and tried a couple of stories...that were not so good.

Pretty hard? What did you expect? Btw, I must not have hinted clearly enough, but it's two prisoners and one officer. Without the stick I think Dean could've kicked their asses, even if they've been suddenly assaulted.

I'm surprised they didn't hint at this topic in ANY way at all during that episode. Me neither. Maybe they preferred to stay on safer grounds of not hinting at *anyting* than hitning at smthg and that woudl ring SO true

[thandie]

Ohhh, alone-beach time! That's great. You can recline and listen to music and bask in the sun and plot fics (I'd plot vids). I honestly tell you that lately my greatest vid plotting time is when I go running with my mp3 player :)

Oh more ficlets! \o/

I liked a LOT that Hendrickson/Dean exchange, with Sam all the time silent and menacing behind Dean, It was the only moment that makes Jus In bello worth a second viewing. They played it SO WELL.
And i adore that part when H is talking to Dean all threatening and Dean looks a little worried and Sam glances for a moment at his back. It was a loaded moment, the writers are not usually so subtle.

clip

[griva_x]

Oh, not everybody in Carnivale is ugly! Surely there are circus freaks, but all the leads are *normal* looking. If you can put aside those awful early 30s costumes. How people could wear anything like that????????? And the main evil guy Father Justin...is even hot, in a mature, sinister way! The main good(?) guy, Ben is not bad looking, if you wash him. :)

About the clip: oh, the quality is better, still I don't get half of what is said, so I did not get the joke. I'm hopeless. ;)

What freaked ME out, the comments to the clip. 3 pages of mainly discussing what's wrong with the gys, why they don't *lean* into each other. PEOPLE! ARE YOU CRAZY????????????????????? Why do they expect for J2 to play circus clowns every time? Maybe the guys are just tired. They're on the panel with their *bosses*, so to say. Jesus.

I LOVE JP'S HAIR! It finally looked liek it has grown where it had to, all of the same length...REALLY sexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxy. :)

[griva_x]

No, this is what I was talking about: http://fluffy-o.livejournal.com/232107.html - it's a sequel to Bubbly.

This ficlet I wrote this morning, on a spur.

And if you read my above reply to Thandie, you might be happy to learn that this MIGHT turn into a short ficlet-series.

You liked it? /whistles innocently/

[griva_x]

/is very glad/

I can just picture Sam kicking ass and taking names when he finds out what happened to Dean. Hmmm. Knowing me and my style, possibly it won't develop that way. I'd focus on other issuesm like, for example, how it would affect their relationship.

Do you think it's totally out of Dean's character if he drops the revenge once they're out of prison?

[inlaterdays]

This flows really well. I can feel Dean's pain, poor baby. Looking forward to the continuation...

[griva_x]

Thank you. I did not beta this (I wrote it on a spur, in 15 minutes), but I feel the rest must be beta'd, since I enter into the realm of Dean's (later on - Sam's) head, and that means speaking in his inner voice, not just describing actions.

Btw, people LOVED Bubbly. Which means, part of credit goes to you. ;)

[inlaterdays]

Aw, you're sweet! I'm really glad, and the credit is all yours. I am just lucky I got a sneak peek. :)

[griva_x]

Heh. I MUST thank you, because then I'll be bugging you to give yoru suggestions.

Btw, candygramme beta'd Done for me. So this is finally done and I'm happy.

[warpedsexuality]

Brrrr. Too realistic for my taste, I'm afraid. Nothing wrong with the writing, though :)

[griva_x]

Heh. That' s a good fb, too. :)

Hope you won't give me the same about Done, though. I'll be *devastated*!