FIC: Navigational Techniques (Gil/Nick)

May 07, 2005 21:10


Title: Navigational Techniques
Author: Knightmusic
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Gil/Nick
Summary: "I rarely end up where I was intending to go, but often I end up somewhere that I needed to be."
Author's Note/Warnings: Random little PWP.  Doesn't fit with any of my other stories.  Just Gil + Nick = hot sex.  I wish I could wake up more mornings with something ( Read more... )

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solamentenic May 8 2005, 02:25:59 UTC
A first time and Nick on top (sort of) story. You've hit my kink. Loved the plotless smut!

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knightmusic May 8 2005, 04:10:22 UTC
Thanks!

You know, I think this is the first time I've ever been able to manage a TRUE PWP. Most of the time, characterization or story just creeps in, despite my best intentions. Glad you enjoyed it.

And yes, I have a huge Nick on top kink, myself. ;)

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elmyraemilie May 8 2005, 03:13:02 UTC
It's a scorcher. Wooo!

I copied He probably wouldn’t want ejaculate on his leather sofa, either while I was reading because it was quite funny, and it still is, but somewhere around Holy. Fucking. Hell. humor got to be the last thing on my mind. ::wipes drool::

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knightmusic May 8 2005, 04:14:18 UTC
Yeah.....the ejaculate comments. laurelgardner read it this morning and said, "I can't believe you wrote that, but I can believe that Gil said it." It took me by surprise. Every so often my Grissom-muse comes up with things like that.

Glad to hear it was enjoyable. Would you like a tissue? ;)

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brats_warren May 9 2005, 12:50:34 UTC
*steals tissue* *passes out before using*

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electricandroid May 8 2005, 07:49:16 UTC
After all, at least in his own experience, a hot, wet mouth was a hot, wet mouth, and having someone who actually wanted to go down on you was most of the race right there. He’s pretty sure Grissom won’t mind a few amateur mistakes along the way.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU.

Realism is good... I figure most people don't have instantaneous ability to deep throat thirteen inch penises at will, or spend hours in the cucumber aisle practising!

It’s the closest to stupid he’s ever seen Grissom look, and it’s a pretty amazing thing.

*Thud*

It probably would have gone more smoothly if they’d cooperated, but neither one was willing to drop their own mission to help the other.

Oh that is cute, and strikes extremely close to the bone... I can just imagine them nearling falling off the bed because they refuse to just take a step back and be calm...

and he realizes he’s not sure what tastes better; Gil’s mouth or Gil’s name.*is extremely jealous of your phrasing ( ... )

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knightmusic May 8 2005, 13:10:54 UTC
Realism is good... I figure most people don't have instantaneous ability to deep throat thirteen inch penises at will, or spend hours in the cucumber aisle practising!

My thoughts too. And by the way, have you read "On Looking Up By Chance" over on the Gil/Nick archive? I forget the author, but it's one of the best, most realistic first blowjob scenes ever. And it's DAMN hot. Kind of inspired me a little.

Oh that is cute, and strikes extremely close to the bone... I can just imagine them nearling falling off the bed because they refuse to just take a step back and be calm...

I imagine there was near catastrophe. But it would have been a lot less interesting if they'd been reasonable about it! ;)

Careful about all that drool....it will do bad things to a keyboard. *speaking from experience*

Thanks ever so much! *bounce*

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electricandroid May 8 2005, 13:15:00 UTC
Whee! Recs!

*uses rec as carrot to finish some extremely boring maths*

I have a drool protector over my keyboard, and wear a bib at all times when reading hot slash :) Have found it useful...

You're welcome!

*gibbers off happily*

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carolina30363 May 8 2005, 09:11:05 UTC
Great thing to read first thing in the morning!
So hot....so Grissom!

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knightmusic May 8 2005, 13:11:44 UTC
Hehe...the best part of waking up is smut in your f-list, right? ;)

Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it!

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anonymous May 8 2005, 23:15:14 UTC
Holy Bejesus.

(remembers to breathe).

That was HAWT!!!!!!!!

Ally in Scotland

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knightmusic May 9 2005, 17:16:31 UTC
why thank you!

breathing helps....keep at it! ;)

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