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FIC: Happy Father's Day (Gil/Toby Arcane, NC-17)

Jun 05, 2007 20:07

Title: Happy Father's Day
Author: Knightmusic
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Gil/Toby Arcane
Kink(s): ageplay/Daddy!kink, spanking, d/s
Summary:courtesy of
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Comments 13

stingray_0011 June 6 2007, 02:17:37 UTC

All right! I admit it. The pairing you had in mind was WAY better than mine... There isn't nearly enough Gil/Toby Arcane fanfic out there. Toby so wanted to jump Grissom's bones in that episode... LOL.

knightmusic June 6 2007, 03:02:47 UTC

Heee! Thanks!

Toby so wanted to jump Grissom's bones in that episode

And Gil so wanted him to!

So, what was your pairing? I'm just curious.

stingray_0011 June 6 2007, 15:04:09 UTC

Well I was thinking Gil/Nick... I'm sure that pairing would've been just as hot but Gil/Toby was AMAZING! And like I said before, there isn't nearly enough of this pairing out there. So it was something fresh to read...

All in all, your story here was soooo hot. I guess I forgot to say that in my first reply but you know that I like all of your stuff anyway!

And I'm sure you already know you're awesome... :D

knightmusic June 7 2007, 17:26:47 UTC

Yeah, Gil/Toby is right at the top of my "Rare and oh so yummy" fic list. I haven't found any other stories where this is the primary pairing, just one or two that reference a past fling between the two of them.

Thanks so much for the comments!

kelly_girl June 6 2007, 05:21:36 UTC

I loved this. Very sexy and them having lots of fun. Loved Toby driving Gil crazy.

knightmusic June 7 2007, 17:24:54 UTC

thanks!

shotboxer June 7 2007, 00:09:25 UTC

*pants, fanning self* WOW. That was hot. I haven't even seen the ep with Toby Arcane in it and it was *still* totally hot. Now I really, really want a sequel. After all, they've got a whole weekend left to go and Toby is already being a real brat.

Not the pairing I thought you'd use either, was thinking maybe Gil/Greg or Gil/Nick, but what I was really wondering if you could do was Gil as the 'boy' - the bit that I figured I'd save for a later challenge since I couldn't come up with anyone I thought could really top him in that way, unless you did a crossover or an OMC. Figured Gil would find it very relaxing to have a whole weekend where he was emphatically 'not in charge' of anything and could let his most outrageous and inappropriate reactions to the 'unfairness' of various situations (I have to work late on *another* child abduction case? No faaaaiiirr . . . accompanied by stomping feet and a big pout - can't you just see Brass' face?)full reign. Maybe next time, yes?

knightmusic June 7 2007, 17:21:58 UTC

Oh, you must see the Toby Arcane ep! Hie thee to Season three! Ep is called "Abracadaver" and, as mentioned above, Toby SOOO wants to jump Grissm's bones ( ... )

munin June 7 2007, 16:03:33 UTC

I have absolutely no idea which episode that Toby Arcane is in but my god was this hot! I love Daddy!kink, especially when Gil's the daddy. Such a typical teenage boy. How yummy!

knightmusic June 7 2007, 17:24:36 UTC

Season three, Episode name is "Abracadaver." It's one of my favorites, mostly because of Toby. Oh, the innuendo!!

Glad you liked this one. And thanks!

dragonladyk June 9 2007, 05:02:53 UTC

I haven't even read the fic yet, but looking at the pairing: OH MY GOD I love you, marry me, I do bow in most humble awe.

Now. Off to read.

DL

dragonladyk June 9 2007, 05:08:07 UTC

I need to wash my brain now.

I mean that as a compliment. ^^ Squickeriffic, dove.

DragonLady

knightmusic June 10 2007, 04:08:15 UTC

I'm very pleased to receive such a comment, trust me. And I know what you mean, this is one kink that's not for the faint of heart. Although not actually the most difficult one I've had to write.

Glad you approved of the pairing, too. Watching that episode, it's such a, "Well, DUH!!" moment. Of course those two need to get all sweaty and naked together. A lot.