Fic: 'The Progress of a Tear', Dumbledore/Grindelwald, Dumbledore/Merfolk, Dumbledore/Doge

Oct 10, 2009 13:24

Title: The Progress of a Tear
Author: purplefluffycat
Pairings: Albus Dumbledore/Gellert Grindelwald, Albus Dumbledore/Merfolk, Albus Dumbledore/Elphias Doge (unrequited)
Rating: R
Warnings: Implied group sex, voyeurism
Words: ~1700
Summary: A distressed Albus Dumbledore is returned from the defeat of Grindelwald, August 1945. The tale of how he came to speak the ( Read more... )

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stella8h8chang October 10 2009, 13:37:53 UTC
That was amazing. As someone who just dumped someone and has been doing a lot of thinking and missing and crying lately as a result, this really struck a chord in me. So...thanks. I'm sorry I can't say anything particularly eloquent, but I felt that you captured the whole palette of emotions really beautifully.

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purplefluffycat October 14 2009, 11:20:55 UTC
Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment.

I felt that you captured the whole palette of emotions really beautifully.

That's a really big compliment; I'm touched. Introspective pieces are quite tricky to write, I think, so I'm particularly glad that this came across as intended.

PurpleFluffyCat x

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charry_lover16 October 10 2009, 17:01:51 UTC
That was brilliant! Why aren't there enough good Albus/Gellert and Elphias?
Well done and thanks for this story!!

Twocanz

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purplefluffycat October 14 2009, 11:23:34 UTC
Thanks very much! I'm pleased that you liked it :-)

Why aren't there enough good Albus/Gellert and Elphias?

Oh, I agree - there are so many possibilities. You might be interested in this fic, which explores both Albus/Gellert and Albus/Elphias:

http://hollycomb.livejournal.com/91676.html

PurpleFluffyCat x

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anonymous October 13 2009, 02:15:00 UTC
That was amazing! I'm not much an Albus/Elphias shipper, but I really felt for the guy this time! The heartbreak he had to go through as well, and never have the opportunity to tell his one and only love how he felt... yeah, I feel a little bad for him now. ;o

But I still love Albus and Gellert, how sad things had to work out the way they did!

But that's J.K. for ya, isn't it? :]

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purplefluffycat October 14 2009, 11:25:17 UTC
Thanks very much for reading and commenting :-) I'm glad the sense of sympathy for Elphias came through here; yeah, it seems a shame that he never get's his chance...

But that's J.K. for ya, isn't it? :]

Quite right!

PurpleFluffyCat x

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phlogistics November 27 2009, 00:11:33 UTC
Excellent! I loved the descriptions, and I felt so terrible for Elphias at the end. Thanks so much for writing this!

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purplefluffycat November 29 2009, 00:38:50 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad the emotions came through, here, and that you enjoyed it :-)

PurpleFluffyCat x

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