[flashfic] BoP

[greywing]

Fandom: Birds of Prey
Characters: Dinah Lance, Helena Bertinelli (Huntress), Oracle
Words: 247
Notes: I... wasn't going to bother posting this. >_>; There's something... off... about the wording and I am compelled to make changes every time I look at it. And MSWord was really upset at me for using an adjective when I should have used an adverb

Comments

[bop_femslash]

ohhh, the wordings LOL

[greywing]

Which is not to suggest in any way that I was consciously trying to craft anything--there are just some lines (noticeably the first and last) that bother me. A lot. =/

[greywing]

Thank you. I kind of wish the OT3 would leave me alone. It would just get... ugly.

[lajacob]

Ugly or not, you know your going to do it anyway..^^
we may never know
you may never admit
but you'll do it. :p

[greywing]

Whyyyyyyyyyyy? (lol) My brain has already tried... it just hasn't gotten it to work.