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[stephanie_1066]

Title: Moving Out
Author: stephanie_1066
Recipient: gangsta_dub
Pairing(s): Addison/Derek
Rating: Universal
Summary: Addison looks forward to some alone time with Derek when Meredith shows up...
Disclaimer: Grey's Anatomy is not mine; I am making no profit.

Comments

[zvi_likes_tv]

This is a pretty good story. I like the way it captures the tension between Meredith and Addison and the way that things used to be good between Derek and Addison.

I think you would probably get a better reaction your fiction on LJ if you put a line between each paragraph. If you want to put something between sections, you could add a horizontal rule. Just put the code whereever you want the rule to appear.

[dolphin18]

That is one screwed up scenario but a fab thing to read about! Lol.

[irinafan]

This makes me sad. Meredith is kinda cruel, how she just sits down on the bed while Addison is still there. =(

[liquid_courage]

It wasn't exactly what I was expecting, but I like how in character Meredith is. It shows a lot of angst for Addison and Derek, and you wrote Addison pretty well too.