Comments | gretchen8642: Big Bang 2010-11, Never Let Me Go (part II)

gretchen8642

Big Bang 2010-11, Never Let Me Go (part II)

Apr 17, 2011 06:30

Part II, in which there's some more stuff that happens.

( He could barely remember a time he’d felt more lost )

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ladynorbert April 17 2011, 06:38:28 UTC

Good grief, I REALLY thought he was going to go through with it! You had me bawling! Great job. :D

gretchen8642 April 17 2011, 07:00:46 UTC

<33333 thanks so much, yay my first comment <3
glad you liked.

sudasana April 17 2011, 07:04:13 UTC

Lovely to see this done! Everything came together, the art is great, the story is wonderful. Very proud of you! <3

gretchen8642 April 17 2011, 07:07:48 UTC

d'awww the best beta in the world, thanks honeybear <3

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gretchen8642 April 17 2011, 08:33:34 UTC

yay thanks so much, glad you like XD
and thrustang for mustang is arguably the best line in the story XD

seaweed_fma April 17 2011, 15:42:49 UTC

Oh wow, that is a great story. I could really see this happening, Roy trying to do what's best and Riza by his side, silently the whole time.

You did a wonderful job. It was a great story, interesting plot, the characters are dead on. And I love Havoc when Roy says no at the altar, that was funny. :)

I wish there would be a followup to this!!

gretchen8642 April 17 2011, 17:03:59 UTC

d'aww thanks so much.

and there will almost certainly not be a followup since that will probably involve kids which are not my forte.

bay115 April 17 2011, 17:56:30 UTC

LOL, oh man I recognize some of the parts from your one shot "So Wrong" for fma_fic_contest's "What is SHE doing here" prompt." It's actually nice to see the aftermath of that story, hehe.

Anyways, this is a lovely story here. The development of Roy and Riza's relationship is well done and you did nicely over their thoughts in the flashbacks. Great job! :D

gretchen8642 April 17 2011, 18:16:35 UTC

I bought myself an extra 900 words by doing a continuation of that one XD. thanks so much for reading this monstrosity XD

gretchen8642 April 18 2011, 07:34:12 UTC

oh actually, I noticed you did a banner for another fic and I was wondering if I could ask you to do one for mine? I'll happily write you a fic about anything you wish for in exchange <3

bay115 April 18 2011, 08:28:20 UTC

Sure, I'll make a banner for this story! I'm doing the fma fic contest Prompt 110 banners at the moment, but I'll be able to make time to do yours. I'll PM it to you when I have it done, which shouldn't take more than a couple days. Also, I'll let you know what fic I want you to write when I send in the banner. :)