Three brides and a groom for four brothers (2/?)

[aidill]

Title: Four brides Three brides and a groom for four brothers (2/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya. Sho, Aiba and Jun will be paired with OC due to plot needs.
Summary: Based on the classic movie 'Seven brides for seven brothers' ... only a bit different  ^______~
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The plot is mine. Revised and completed byzazasukie 
Genre: AU
Words count: 918
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[shadow_kick]

Hello! It has been a while since we've talked :D How's it going, you guys?

This new story looks really promising. Looking forward to see how it'll play out. <3
There are a few mistakes here and there though.

Thank you for sharing!

[aidill]

Hello! Yeah, it has been a while, but I finally have a new story to post! \(^o^)/ (zazasukie is still on hiatus)

I'm glad you find the plot promising (though it's not as surprising as others because it's based in a well-known movie -__-U)

Could you please point me those mistakes out? I don't have a beta-reader, so any help is welcome! ^____^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[shadow_kick]

:D Yay!

Ahahaha, if it's any consolation, I've never heard of the movie. >.<

Yepp, I'll be glad to help. Stuff like "her" when it's supposed to be "his". & grammatical errors, e.g "pretty in it" instead of "pretty with it". & it's "triumphant" not "triumphal". And so on.

<3

[shadow_kick]

Sorry! triumphal is okay. >.< It's just that it's archaic so I got confused for a moment. My bad. D:

[aidill]

You don't know about 'Seven brides for seven brothers'? O___O It's a musical film from 1954. (I love the first (I think is the fist :/) song)
LOL! You make me feel soooo old... T_T (just joking! but I think you will be surprised if you knew my age! XD)

I've corrected the mistakes you pointed out. Thank you very much for your help. ^___^

[shadow_kick]

Noes, that wasn't my intention at all. xDD (...*whispers* how old?)

I didn't really do much, but you're welcome. :)

[aidill]

A lady never reveals her true age! But well, I'm a few years older than Ohno. ^____~

[soraohno]

Wow...

*bows*