"Maybe the older man was tricking him the other day, maybe he didn’t want to see him and he was with his men laughing behind his back."
Sounds like Jedediah is insecure, I like this it builds suspense.I think you did a sweet job on this third installment it really shows that you thought more about the movie and brought in more details and characters. Especially how you end it with Larry mumbling something very Larry-like to himself. The third person gives it more depth then the last one had.
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Kinda nervous cause its like my first lemon.
I hope I did a good job on it, spent like 3 hours writing it :)
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Sounds like Jedediah is insecure, I like this it builds suspense.I think you did a sweet job on this third installment it really shows that you thought more about the movie and brought in more details and characters. Especially how you end it with Larry mumbling something very Larry-like to himself. The third person gives it more depth then the last one had.
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