Beauty must be broken - Part 2: Lithium

May 15, 2007 13:13

Title: Beauty must be broken
Authour: Dana
Pairing: ReitaxMiyavi
Rating: NC-15, angst
Warnings: Yaoi, angst, non beta
Genre: Angst, yaoi
Disclaimer: I own nothing and make no profit with this.

Part 2 - Lithium )

yaoi, fanfiction, reitaxmiyavi

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wowwwowow sukinayaoides May 15 2007, 20:48:32 UTC
aww wow!! that was soo good!
&emotionally heart renching.. D:
yet i can relate to it and i understand it ( i was in a relationship that made me feel like this once..though it was not the love i had mistaken it for):
"His words make me cry. I’m imprisoned. Maybe that is why I stay by his side. My own emotional masochism. And I can never escape, for I dare not, I wish not.
Darling I can’t live without you.” And I would last long if I’m with you. I close my eyes trying to fight of tears.
“And I can’t be without you. But I fear you; I fear what I might do to you.” He tenses in my arms for just a second. He knows I’m crying; a sob betrayed me.
“No matter what kind of pain you cause me from time to time, it can’t measure up to the pleasure you bring me just by being by my side.” That is all. That is our truth."

...*-* wow
*bows head in reverance*
pain.. in the reality of it all, goes side by side with pleasure. two extremes of the heart.. blurring at the seams
..such is life~
wonderful bittersweet chaos ..this 'beauty'
in our deepest shadows ~this is love
fighting to find our souls' missing piece (,_, )

sweetie your writing it seems, has sent my mind into angsty whirlwinds! as always you write angst as beautifully as ur smutt! hehe XD
well done darling!
i am offically moved!
~mei-chan~

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Re: wowwwowow greenmoon666 May 16 2007, 03:39:19 UTC
Gods I needed some serious angst! I was starting to choke on all the fluff... @_@
*is feeling a bit too good about hefself at the moment* Thank you honey! I'm feeling so very touched this morning because of the comments! T_T *happy* I luv ya! *lost for words* T_T I need a tissue!

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